If paddling a boat through the darkest tar,
the tar ensures you will not get too far.
Too far to picture a path towards light,
as light will grasp on, resolving all fights.
Fights no longer yours, yet you did not let go,
let go of the knots that keep you from control.
Controlling steep steps you have chosen to take,
taking what is real, removing the fake.
The fake can be scanned with a fine toothed comb,
combing through tough knots, while clearing wide roads.
Wide roads show views seen indefinitely,
indefinite scenes, lived infinitely.
Infinite tug of wars between good and bad,
bad thoughts quickly fade, hearing as you command.
Command with your eyes as they disclose all truths,
truth unmasking ego, exposing true you.
– Grace Y. Estevez-Reddy
I really like the idea, the message and the structure. The flow could be better but that didn’t take away from the good points. Looking forward to more of these kind!
Glad you enjoyed it.
ego is yo so
like you know
but could be for sure
so eshew the hugs and focus on the pocus.
lol. I agree
myself not being demonstrative but saving grace. queen to queens level three
estan clavada dos cruces. friend or foe. too obscure to know
take care of yesself.
Always …tu tambien.
i ll be here.
ciao for now
Ciao my friend..donde te vas?
oh..ok. Adios y cuidate tambien.❤️
“Fights no longer yours, yet you did not let go…” That is beautiful.
Thanks so much Haoyando. I’m glad you liked it.❤️
I love truth so much I had it tattooed on my back.
Love it Lance! May the truth continuously prevail!❤️