I was invited back in September to collaborate on a Rengay-style poem with David of Skeptic’s Kaddish, and I was truly honored. It was my first time trying the form, and I learned a lot while having fun exploring it with David, who is a wonderful writer. This week he asked me to create another one with him, and it was just as enjoyable and inspiring. I hope everyone enjoys the poems as much as we enjoyed writing them.💕

Quiet Blossom by David and Grace
walk slowly beneath the trees
I inhale the quiet air
feel deep roots under my feet – GR
ancestors call forth softly
through the marrow of old stones – DB
worn wounds no longer whisper
they sleep soundly in my bones
the past fades like morning fog – GR
squirrel buries nuts
forgetting by dinnertime
where its trove lies hid – DB
new seeds grow where loss once lived
life remembers yet moves on -GR
knees scrape on gravel
mother gathers her toddler
before the tears fall – DB

What Lies Below by David and Grace
smart from the waist up—
nobody on Zoom suspects
my boxers below – DB
a soft breeze drifts through the room
truth wavers dangerously – GR
cool tingles gather
tiny strands rise in the wind
chills pulse over skin – DB
curtains tremble light
secrets brush the open air
breath holds, almost told – GR
pressure surges suddenly
I turn off screenview and bolt – DB
chair quickly swivels
waist up lies echo softly
bashful boxers bow – GR

These Rengay’s are fun and creative, Grace … and they were something new for me too, when I did my collaboration with David
Yesss they are so much fun. Truly enjoyed.💕
Beautiful poems. I love the first one- it’s a profound and beautiful poem
Thanks so very much, Sadje. Glad you enjoyed.💕
You’re welcome my friend
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Wonderful collaborations, Grace. Well done.
Thanks a bunch, Nancy.💕
What a beautiful collaboration, Grace and David 👏. This collaborative poem conveys a profound sensitivity: its imagery and transitions strike a balance—between the intimate and the universal, between silence and emotion. I love how each verse evokes roots, memory, change, and rebirth, with a delicacy that touches the heart.
Best regards and hugs. 👏🤗
So sweet of you, Lincoln. Thank you so much. Glad you enjoyed.💕
*hug!*
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beautifully done and wonderful collaboration between you and David, Grace … 🤍
So glad you enjoyed, Destiny. Thank you so much.💕
pleasure always…🤍
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What a fantastic collaboration – you and David Grace sing in these pieces 🙌
Thanks so very much, Ange. Glad you enjoyed.💕
Didn’t know anything about this poetry form – really nice! I like them both – different styles. Well done to both of you!
Thanks so very much.💕🥰💕
Beautiful collaboration, Grace and David! Hugs to both of you.💕
Thanks so very much, Eugi. Glad you enjoyed.💕
You’re welcome, Grace.
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This is such a fun read! Good thing he remembered to stop his camera! Lovely duet, Grace and David! 💞💞💞
Thanks so much, Dawn. Absolutely. Glad you enjoyed, my friend.💕
Great work by both of you, Grace and David! I enjoyed both poems! 🥰
Thanks so much, O’Nika.💕
Very nice, Grace.
I loved this collaboration Grace with David! Lot’s of love to you!!!! xxx
This is truly interesting… Very deep poetry
An amazing collaboration. It’s so good to read you both again. 👏👏👏❤️