A burning letter at last lands,
open it quick, quivering hands.
I take a seat, afraid to stand,
inhale each word, to understand.
A message clear from up above
received quite well, fit like a glove.
Senses within, give me a shove
then speaks to me with so much love.
“Cover your eyes so you can see,
what lays inside everybody.
Vibrations move invisibly,
mixed energies that disagree.
Mass balancing is a great need,
and empathy is a true heed,
just do your part, go plant the seeds,
then pick a few so all succeed.
Choose the pill you wish to swallow,
then look ahead, build your tomorrow.
Do not look back, let go of sorrows,
leave a bright trail others can follow.
Offering tips, so smiles can live,
erase old wounds, learn to forgive.
With lessons done, do not relive,
for what you take, make sure you give.”
I drop a tear, ego disbands,
the message heard were not demands,
nor chokeholds made of mere commands,
instead quite free like windswept sand.
I close my eyes, wisdom expands,
body and soul, become one strand.
Excited by this master plan,
euphoric hopes make each step grand.
– Grace Y. Estevez- Reddy
Β«I close my eyes, wisdom expands,
body and soul, become one strand.
Excited by this master plan,
euphoric hopes make each step grand.Β»
amazingππ»β¨π
Sincerest thanks for your support, my friend.πππ₯°β€οΈ
you’re welcome, dear Graceππ
Wow my dear Grace, this is simply spectacular! What a touching piece and omg your rhyming is just sublime! It adds such a melodic flow making every stanza absolutely divine! And that ending ππ»ππ»ππ». Amazingly done, my amazing friend π€π€
I am so happy you liked it, dear Ace.Thank you so much.I truly appreciate your kind support, my friend.π
Indeed, when message becomes clear. Love is heard, the heart expands, the soul is enlightened, the breadth held! A lovely share!
Indeed, when the message is clear. Love is heard, the heart expands. The soul is enlightened, the breadth held! A lovely share!
So happy you liked it. Thanks so very much.π
Youβre welcome! Sorry, if more than one comment came through. It kept saying, comment not sent! Blessings!
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This is really amazing, Grace! You’re pieces are always so inspiring and full of hope. The way you make words rhyme effortlessly is exceptional. Really well written, loved this β€
Thanks so much, AB. I am so happy you enjoyed it.I truly appreciate your kindness.π
My pleasure β€
Wonderful work! Your poem is absolutely beautiful. Outstanding one!
Thanks so very much.π
Stunning, my friend. β€οΈ
Thanks so much.π
Welcome, Grace. π
Very nice
Thanks so much.π
You are welcome
Wooww!! Such a stunning write-up πβ€οΈ
So happy you liked it, Thank you.π
I always have my mind blown after reading your work. Beautifully written, Greece
*Sorry, Grace!
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Thatβs so nice to hear, Shweta. Thanks so very much.π
You are most welcome, dear Grace β€π€π
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One more amazing poem. Simply spectacular. Excited by this master plan..so lovely. Well done ππ
Happy you liked it, KK. Thank you.π
My pleasure π
Great poem! The last stanza is especially wonderful. Loved it! π
Happy to hear that. Thanks so much.π
Such a lovely message in a bottle Grace!ππ·β€οΈβ€οΈ
Thanks, Cindy. I truly appreciate your kind feedback.π
you’re so welcomeπππ
a well written rhyming poem wrapped in hope and acceptance. The master plan!
Thanks so much.β€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈ
surely you are welcome… π€π
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