Flashbacks can beam shadows,
born from yesterday,
a darkness so hollow,
it never decays.
Time flies ever shallow,
daydreams run astray,
bright silver sharp arrows,
forms mixed shades of grey.
Magnificent outline,
steps lessons create,
vast infinite design,
opens heavy gates.
Star flecked cosmos align,
to make hearts feel great,
purity so divine,
it carries no weight.
Grand substance so certain,
consistently flows,
opens velvet curtains,
then starts a new show.
Removes unseen burdens,
warm spirits then glows,
creates peaceful versions,
raises all plateaus.
– Grace Y. Estevez – Reddy
Moonwashed Weekly Challenge March 26, 2024
Prompt - Star Flecked
Wonderfully graceful as always thank you for the smile it produced
Thank you so much, happy it brought you a smile.💕🙏💕
I love your take on the prompt. Your use of color (silver, grey ) and fabric (velvet, curtains) to express emotions from darkness to bliss’ “plateau” is fantastic! Well done, Grace. Kudos!!
Thanks a bunch, Suzette. Delighted to know you enjoyed it, my friend. Truly appreciated always.💕🙏💕
It’s always a pleasure Grace!
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Ooh, I loved your sun-flecked line in particular, Grace. A beauty! ✨
Thanks a bunch, Nancy. Happy you enjoyed it.💕🥰💕
Beautifully written my friend.
Thank you so very much, my friend.💕
My pleasure 😇
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Stunning Grace 💕💕
Thank you so much, Maggie 💕🙏💕
My pleasure always Grace ❣️🤗❣️
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ommigosh, Grace. this is definitely one of my favorites of yours!
~David
Do happy to hear that, David. Thank you so much. Truly appreciated.💕🙏💕
Oh wow Grace, what a beautiful and creative flow in how your poem responds to this prompt. Sweet! 😍💖🥰
Glad you enjoyed it, dear Kym. Thanks a bunch, my friend.💕🙏💕
You are so very welcome Grace. My pleasure always! 🥰💖🤗
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Such a gorgeous poem from the shadows to the beautiful finish lines that “Grace” us!~ Superb💓
So sweet of you, my dear friend. Thank you so much. Truly appreciate you.💕🙏💕
You’re so very welcome, dear Grace. I appreciate you too💓
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From shadows to opening velvet curtains and starts a new show – superb thought process, Grace. Brava! 💕
Thank you so much, Eugi. Delighted to hear you enjoyed it.💕🥰💕
My pleasure, Grace!
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Great poem!
Thank you so much 💕
Love the poetry, purple, passion, and velvet “plush” !! <3
Glad you enjoyed. Thanks so much 💕
You share exquisite verses every day. I love them. Hugs friend Grace.
So happy to hear that, my friend. Thank you 💕
stunning, Grace…🤍💫
Thanks so much 💕
my pleasure 🤍
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Such a graceful and inspiring poem, Grace! Love the rhythmic flow of thoughts and verses ❤️🌺
Thanks so much, KK 💕
Most welcome 💕
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Art imitating your words or your words imitating art? 🙂 Beautiful
Thank you so much 💕
You are always welcome! I’m glad when I can read one of your poems.
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Lovely, Grace 🙂
Thanks so much 💕
Heart warming. A beautiful and lovely poem❤️
Thanks so much 💕
Beautiful…I love how it transitions from shadows to glowing warm spirits.
Glad you enjoyed. Thanks so much 💕
My pleasure. ❤️
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Stunning transformation you portray, Grace! Beautifully written 💞💞💞
Thanks a bunch, Dawn💕