Rejections appear subtilely,
through sly remarks, no one else reads.
At times it crashes abruptly,
planting deep routed doubtful seeds.
Why is it so hard to be kind?
Does it feel good to pass on strife?
Can open eyes have hearts so blind?
Do peoples grief fulfill dull lives?
Rejection murders confidence,
eliminates hopes and condemns,
a gift of great incompetence,
afraid opinions may contend.
How do poor feelings rule strong minds?
Why are wrongs kept while good vibes hide?
Can negative thoughts be assigned?
Do fears derive from deep inside?
Rejections hurt then gain control,
most often they are self imposed,
profound reflections from the soul,
healed once exposed, so they are shown.
Can insecurities find cures?
If intentions are clearly pure?
Will self expressions rest secure?
So inner whispers reassure.
– Grace Y. Estevez – Reddy
Love the “inner whispers reassure” hope is a good strategy in kindness.
Thank you so much, dear Suzette.💕
Always a pleasure 😊
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Beautifully worded and many questions to ponder. I really like this piece, Grace. I particularly like the lines, ‘How do poor feelings rule strong minds? Why are wrongs kept while good vibes hide?’ Thanks for sharing x
So happy you enjoyed it, Ellie. Thank you so much.💕
Beautifully written Grace
Thank you so much, dear Sadje.💕
Upper always welcome
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You’re * sorry 😅
I understood. Thanks again, my friend.💕
My pleasure
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So beautifully expressed that it makes my momma-bear want to go into defense mode!
This line is so very true, “Why are wrongs kept while good vibes hide?” Why is it that the negatives sink deep and take root, while compliments and positives are brushed aside and fade quickly?
Wonderfully written, Grace!
Thanks so much, Dawn. Yes, if it was balanced than the negative would fade just as quickly and vice versa. Happy you enjoyed, my friend.💕
Another beautiful poem from your divine treasure, dear Grace ✨💟💫
Thanks a bunch, dear Navin.💕
A little piece of kindness is most essential
It sure is, Ivor. Thanks so much.💕
“Rejections appear subtilely,
through sly remarks, no one else reads.
At times it crashes abruptly,
planting deep routed doubtful seeds.”
This 1st verse says it all for me Grace! 👌👌👍👍 People don’t realise how much of a negative effect sly; snide remarks can have on a person over the course of time. Well written! 👏👏
Thank you so much. Yes, lasting impacts can affect so much. We should really consider our words prior to speaking, especially in anger. Thanks again.💕
Resonates! Purely Loved <3 !!
Thanks so much.💕
Beautiful 💜 well described.
I’ve learnt and am still learning to be confident of myself even in times of weakness and strength. The world is ready to pull you down always, be determined to rise always.
Love this. Yesss. Thanks so much for sharing.💕
💜 My pleasure!
Thank you too.
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Powerful. It’s sad the way many focus on negative
Thanks so much. Absolutely.💕
I enjoyed reading it. Loved the way how it ended. ❤
Thanks so much 💕
I went through that, until i met a group of authors who changed my life forever. Thank you Grace
Thanks so much, my friend.💕
Many people get disappointed and start believing themselves worthless after getting failure and rejection. Your poem will definitely show light in the darkness of their mind.
Thats so nice to hear. Thank you so much.💕
Nice
Thank you💕
I think so Grace.. especially if they read this… 💗
Thank you, Cindy. 💕🙏💕
Welcome Grace! 💞
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These lines are so true-
Rejections murder confidence, and
Can open eyes have hearts so blind?
But
Inner whispers reassure…
give light and hopes.
Beautifully written, Grace
I am so glad you enjoyed it, my friend. Thanks so much, dear KK.💕
You’re always welcome, Grace 💖
This is a beautiful, contemplative poem!❤
Thank you so much, Aaysid. I’m so glad you enjoyed it.💕
Beautiful piece
Thank you so much 💕
“How do poor feelings rule strong minds?
Why are wrongs kept while good vibes hide?
Can negative thoughts be assigned?
Do fears derive from deep inside?”
My God, this really speaks to me.
So happy to hear that. Thank you so much.💕🙏💕
i simply love this. uplifting.
Happy you enjoyed it. Thank you so much.💕
“Can open eyes have hearts so blind”?
This above line and the whole poem is such a beautiful work of pure expressions..!
Loved it. ❣️
Happy you enjoyed it. Thank you so much.💕
Wonderfully written. A good look into the mind of those struggling to stay in high vibrations
Thanks so much.💕😊💕
You framed this topic so well. Very nice!
Rejection is something I struggle with, so this is very relatable–searching for healing and inner self-confidence. Thank you for this:)
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Beautiful written ma’am
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Wow Grace this is so good!!!!
Thanks so much.💕
Lovely poem, thanks for sharing
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Nice
Thanks so much💕
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Why is so hard to be kind? Beautiful! Kindness is a sign of confidence. Thank you for the words!💕
Thanks so much 💕
It’s brilliant, Grace! Your words expressed all your emotions and thoughts. Most importantly, you succeeded in making all of us understand the true meaning of absolutely beautiful sentences like,”Why are wrong kept while good vibes hide?” Best of luck for your future! Loads of love and blessings!🖤🖤🖤
So nice to hear. Thank you so very much. Truly appreciate it.💕🙏💕
This actually soothes.
Happy to hear that. Thank you 💕
Great, am flattered 🙇
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