Tell me what you want to hear,
pick the words to ease your fears.
Make sure that they all sound clear,
serene echoes linger near.
Swallow hearts that feel sincere,
let cold dark thoughts disappear.
Do not let doubts interfere,
or provoke a single tear.
Melodies ring in your ears,
sugar coat paths that appear.
Skip along with faith and cheer,
let it guide you as you steer.
Tell me now, from this point here,
is the future looking sheer?
Do you feel like a pioneer,
painting dreams that you hold dear?
Life transforms to less severe,
strong positive vibes adhere.
Every day brings souvenirs,
masterpiece expands each year.
Lighthearted, so cavalier,
confidence that perseveres,
Reflective, bright chandelier,
makes all eyes pause and revere.
– Grace Y. Estevez – Reddy
Moonwashed Weekly Challenge #150 – July 04, 2023
Prompt – Masterpiece

Amazing message here, Grace, and extra props for the rhyme scheme! I don’t think I could ever rhyme 24 consecutive lines! It’s the mark of a supremely talented writer. I’ve always loved your work, my friend. You bring joy to your readers every day. 🙂
So sweet of you to say and so nice to hear, Mike. Thank you so much. I am so happy you you enjoyed it. Truly appreciate you, my friend.💕
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Thank you so much 💕
I “feel like a pioneer painting dreams that I could hold dear”
Very lovely and inspiring.Thank you dear Grace.❤🙏
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Great piece indeed
Thank you so much 💕
Well penned!
Love the increasing climb of peace through great imagery…days turn to years through sheer veils..
Love the imagery in:
“…is the future looking sheer?
Do you feel like a pioneer,”
“Every day brings souvenirs,
masterpiece expands each year.”
Thank you so much, dear Suzette. So happy you enjoyed it and these lines in particular , my friend. Truly appreciate you.💕😊💕
Always a pleasure, Grace!!
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This how I fun jingle to it.
Happy to hear that, Belladonna. Thanks 💕😊💕
You’re welcome!
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Inspirational … Mhh …
Thanks so much 💕
A beautiful message in your poem Grace./. Great job on the prompt! ❤️
Thanks so much, Cindy 💕
You’re welcome Grace💞
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You are a fricking rockstar Grace.
You are so sweet, Nicole. Thank you so very much, my friend.💕
Beautiful poem, Grace.
Thanks so much, Marsha 💕
You’re welcome, Grace. 🙂
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Beautifully written my friend
Thanks so very much, my friend 💕
It’s my pleasure
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Beautiful 😃👏👏
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Wow Grace!
That’s awesome!
Really love the message shared with this poem.
So happy you enjoyed it, my friend. Thank you 💕
Beautiful lines, Grace, and so uplifting. Your lyrical poem is like a lovely song. 💖
Glad you liked it, Eugenia. Thanks so much 💕
Most welcome, Grace! 💖
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So deep and meaningful verses, along with awesome imagery! Well penned, Grace 👍💖
Thanks a bunch, KK.💕
My pleasure 💖
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Love your poignant poems
Thanks so much 💕
Great take, Grace.
Thank you so much, Indira 💕
My pleasure, dear.
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This is a masterpiece. I thank you for this wonderful piece❤️
Thank you so much. Happy you enjoyed it 💕
lt is a great poem, it is full of bright ideas l loved it so much.
Thanks so much.💕
“masterpiece expands each year”…what a wonderful wish and goal to strive for. Love the flow of this beautiful piece, Grace! 💞💞💞
Happy you enjoyed it, my friend. Thank you so much 💕