Tell me what you want to hear,
pick the words to ease your fears.
Make sure that they all sound clear,
so all echoes linger near.
Swallow hearts that feel sincere,
let the dark thoughts disappear.
Do not let doubts interfere,
or provoke a single tear.
Whispered songs ring in your ears,
coating each path that appears.
Skip along with faith and cheer,
let it guide you as you steer.
Tell me now, from this point here,
is the future looking sheer?
Do you feel like a pioneer,
painting dreams that you hold dear?
– Grace Y. Estevez – Reddy
Lovely ♥️
Thanks so much .💕
Nice rhyme structure!
Thanks so much .💕
Yw
Beautiful write, Grace. Love it. ❤️
Glad you liked it, my friend. Thank you.💕🙏💕
I loved it, my dear friend. You’re most welcome. Always. 💖🙏💖
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Beautifully written, dear Grace! Loved it ❤❤
Glad you liked it.Thanks so much.💕
You’re welcome ❤❤
“Swallow hearts that feel sincere,
let the dark thoughts disappear.” What a lovely line! Beautiful work, Grace🤗❤
Thanks so much, Suvi.💕
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Wow! Wonderful rhyming.💕
Thanks so much, Jan.💕
Question marks provoke many thoughts indeed. A good construction of thoughts, Grace 💖💖
Thanks so much, KK.💕
My pleasure 💖
Wow! you kept the rhyme scheme same for all the lines, brilliant. <3
Thank you so much.💕
So beautiful Grace!❤️😍
Thanks so much, Cindy.💕
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“Skip along with faith and cheer,
let it guide you as you steer…”
This made me smile. Thanks, Grace. Such a cool poem! 🙂
So happy to hear that, Mike. Thank you.💕
I love this poem a lot! It’s beautifully penned Grace! Well done
So happy you enjoyed it, Marie. Thank you.💕