Fluorescent thoughts rest in my mouth,
choke up inside mind full of doubts.
Chain deep set goals to barricade,
slice dreams apart till faith decays.
Sweet melodies held up inside,
vibrations pierce, emotions hide.
Outer details sting eager eyes,
inner courage does not arise.
Sounds penetrate through every pore,
to gently rest within my core.
A whispered scream strangles my fears,
swallow all words, gifts to my ears.
“Accept yourself,
be who you are.
Jump off the shelf,
so hopes fling far.
Not every wish
could be appeased,
spirits flourish
with grace and ease.
Some will love you,
others will hate.
Always be true
then leave to fate.
Feelings you hold
are vital too.
Do not let molds
control your views.”
Full moonlit covered heart and soul,
a peaceful sense of pure control.
Goosebumps draped from head to toe,
assured tomorrow shines and glows.
– Grace Y. Estevez – Reddy
Written for RXC PROMPT #245 hosted by Reena
Prompt – Write a prose poem based on these lines:
“It came from somewhere too far to walk, from as far away as the most unreasonable desire, the most devastating hope.” – An excerpts from the book โExtinctionsโ by Sharmishtha Mohanty.
Really beautiful.
Thanks so much ๐
Beautiful motivational poem. Love the lines:
“do not let molds control your views.โ
Amen to that!
Full moonlit coveredย
Thanks so much, Suzette. So happy you enjoyed.๐
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Gorgeous. If we can accept who we are, we can begin moving forward in our lives.
Absolutely. Thanks so much.๐
Yay!!!
Quite motivating poem especially the para- ‘Full moonlit covered heart and soul,
a peaceful sense of pure control.
Goosebumps draped from head to toe,
assured tomorrow shines and glows’.Thanks for sharing,Grace๐ค
Glad you enjoyed. Thanks so much.๐
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Thank you, Dhirendra. I see your name and it doesnโt say anonymous on it so it was most likely fixed. Thank you.๐
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Good poem and certainly with a good message. Thank you, Grace. ๐๐โฎ๏ธ
Happy you liked it. Thanks so much.๐
Life is so painstakingly bitter sweet Grace as we muddle through and sometimes fly! ๐๐ wonderful poem!
It really is. Thanks so much, Cindy.๐
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Wonderful write Grace, very uplifting. ๐ฅฐ
Love these lines:
“Feelings you hold
are vital too.
Do not let molds
control your views”
So true! ๐
Thanks so much, Kristen. Iโm glad you liked it.๐
My pleasure! ๐
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A brilliant interpretation of the prompt Grace .. ๐ค๐
Happy you enjoyed it, Ivor. Thanks so much.๐
Wonderful writing
Thanks so much, Chris.๐
Youโre so welcome Grace
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As always, full of positive thoughts Grace. Beautifully written
Thank you so much, dear Sadje.๐
Most welcome
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This is absolutely beautiful!!!!
Thanks so much.๐
Shines and glows, just like this beautiful poem. Lovely, Grace. ๐
Iโm so happy you enjoyed it, my friend. Thank you so much, Jeff.๐
I did, very much so; youโre welcome, Grace. Always. ๐
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love this!
<3
David
So glad you liked it. Thanks so much.๐
Wow This is Really a nice Poem and also motivative
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Amazing words and a great piece of motivation.โค
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Beautiful โค๏ธ
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Very well written Grace. A very important message conveyed poetically ๐
Thank you so much, I’m so happy you liked it.๐
Accept yourself,
be who you are… That should be the spirit. A beautifully crafted piece, Grace, as always ๐๐๐
Thanks so much, KK. Glad you liked it.๐
It’s my pleasure ๐
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Beautiful and uplifting, Grace!๐
Thank you so much ๐
Beautifully Written!
Thanks so much.๐
My pleasure Grace. Have an amazing weekend. ๐ฆโค๏ธ
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Marvelous
Thanks so much.๐
How lovely !!!! ๐
Thanks so much.๐
Gorgeous.
Thanks so much.๐