What’s wrong with having fantasies?
Must we all see, to then believe?
Why must this be reality?
I rather build what I perceive!
Why can’t my life be my daydream?
Every new day would be supreme.
All human beings on the same team,
within each smile a beaming gleam.
No deceptions or need for lies,
all felt hunger would quickly die.
Each breathing life feels nature’s tie,
instinctively learns to abide.
If everyone wants to feel whole,
why can’t we break away from molds?
What would it take to free our souls,
from playing these unfulfilled roles?
Why can’t our lives consist of peace,
and everything come in with ease?
All wishes instantly received,
flying to us like a warm breeze.
Maybe if one day hearts unite,
embrace more love while ending fights,
a new world can arise so bright,
transforming darkness into light.
– Grace Y. Estevez – Reddy
This is a powerful poem! I would step into this poem and join you there! π
I would love that. Thanks so much, Susan.πππ
I soooo agree Grace, why not. such a beautiful dream to hold in our heart and teach. πππ
Absolutely. Thanks so much, my friend.πππ
“Why” is a psychological master
By asking it gets answers from you π,
Very nicely built up the themeπΊ
Thanks for sharing. I appreciate it.πππ
Loved this! Oh your words, they’re marvelous! β€
Thanks so very much.π
This is beautiful Grace! π
“If everyone wants to feel whole,
why canβt we break away from molds?
What would it take to free our souls,
from playing these unfulfilled roles?”
Im so happy you liked it. Thanks so very much.π
The connection between love, transformation, and dark, and light, is beautiful, Grace. Gorgeous poem, my friend. β€β€
Thanks so very much, my dear friend.Your kind words truly mean so much to me.π
Youβre most welcome, Grace. Itβs my complete pleasure. π
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Gorgeous poem oozing with a world of it’s own, wow; this took me to another realm.. One day. ππ»π
Some day, my friend. Thanks so very much.πππ
My dear Grace, this has to be one of my favorites of yours! It is so absolutely mesmerizing and takes one to a dreamy place. I love how this sparks imagination and questions within, thatβs the work of a very talented writer! Thank you for this gift, you shine so bright β¨β¨π€π€
Thanks so very much, my dear friend.I truly appreciate your kindness and support.Much love to you.π
Love this so muchπ Rebloggingπ
So happy to hear that. Thanks so much.π
Love and hate my own fantasies. LOL.
Lol. β€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈ
Amazing poem.
Thanks so much.π
Youβre welcome
Wow! This is another masterpiece. Your writing as always was so good and imaginative!! Incredible
Thanks so much, I truly appreciate your kind words of support.πππ
You are welcome!!π
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Such a beautiful and thoughtful poem, Grace! The last stanza was really pleasing. Loved it β€
Im really glad you liked it, AB. Thank you so much.π
You’re so welcome β€οΈ
A new and bright world can certainly arise, if poets like you germinate seeds of such a hope with powerful writings. Why not? Keep shining, Graceππ
Thatβs so nice to hear, dear KK. Thanks so much, my friend.You words truly mean a lot to me.π
Pleasure is mine, Grace ππ
This is such a powerful poem….beautifully expressed…I was wondering y you haven’t written a new post in long time…you know what I found out…somehow the notification was turned off….I don’t understand….but now I’ve turned it on π«
Thanks so much, Navin. I am so happy to hear you enjoyed this piece. Thanks for checking in and turning on notifications for my blog, the same has happened to me a few times with blogs I follow. I appreciate your kind support.β€οΈ
π Great idea. Instead of all the reasons Why something wont work we simply ask Why not?π
Absolutely.Thanks so much .πππ
Gorgeous poem! π A beautiful thought.
Thanks so much, Sam.Iβm glad you liked it.π
Beautiful! Reminded me of “Imagine” by John Lennon π
Thatβs so nice to hear, Nick. What a beautiful compliment. Thanks so much.π
the answer of all the why’s actually lies inside our heart n soul..which are expressed in our way of living and thinking
I agree. Thanks for sharing, Ayushi.π
I can’t believe I read this, it’s incredible π₯ππLoved itπ΅οΈ
Beautiful poetry Grace π
Thanks so much, Akriti.π
This is such an inspiring and powerful poem Grace. There is so much love in it
A real treasure my friend
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So happy you enjoyed it, Marie. Thanks so much.π
A really meaningful and eye opening piece of magic!
Thanks so very much.π
Lovely poem, Grace. Glad I read it.
So happy you enjoyed it. Thanks so much π
Tremendous. I would love to make this into a rap song, but I believe this poem has its powerful voice that no other forms of arts can compare to. Keep dreaming and writing, Love β€οΈ
What a beautiful comment, Emily. Thank you so very much. You truly put a huge smile on my face.β€οΈ
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Great questions ππ»
Thanks so much.π