Our sprouted seeds, followed the cloak,
transforming all your hopes to smoke.
Dark tears you cried, created life,
the art you made expressed your strife.
The cloak came back, this time for me,
breaking you down, bruising your knees.
Grief filled your heart, pushed till you fell,
I fought to bring you back from hell.
You would not budge, you lost your way,
but snapped right back fearing I’d stay.
We dried our tears, ran from that place,
escaped the pit, to follow grace.
United with all we thought lost,
love does prevail as heartbeats cross.
Another chance to be reborn,
a brand new slate without a scorn.
Decide to give it one more try,
right from the start, live side by side.
This time without a space to fail,
we wave good bye as our ship sails.
True love could never be erased,
instead it grows a bit each day.
Painting fine pictures that come true,
made to shine bright for me and you.
– Grace Y. Estevez – Reddy
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so beautiful Grace! 💖
Thank you so much, my friend.💕
One of my favorite films, and a cruelly elegant poem inspired. Heavens, you nearly have me in tears.
Thanks so much, Masa.I love this movie too.So profound.💕
Beautifully written!!👏🏻
So glad you liked it. Thank you so much.💕
Lovely poem, Grace. When I read the title, I immediately thought of a Robin Williams movie released in 1998 of the same title. All in all, it was beautiful also.
Thanks so much, KT. Yes, it was inspired by that movie.It’s one of my favorites.💕
I thought it might be…it’s one of my favorites too.😊💕
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Thank you, Grace, for beautiful poem!
Joanna
Thanks so much, Joanna.💕
You are welcome.
Joanna
My goodness, this is such a beautiful poem. Loved every verse, especially the last one, Grace🤗❤
I’m so happy to hear that, Suvi. Thanks so much.💕
Truly a pleasure❤
A gorgeous love story. Wonderful, Grace. 💖💖
So glad you liked it, Jeff. Thank you so much.💕
Decide to give it one more try.. that’s the true love. Never give up. Well done, Grace 👌💐💖
Absolutely . Thanks so much, KK.💕
Most welcome Grace 💖
Aww. Again. Awe-mazing.
Thanks so much, y friend.💕
You brought shine in my eyes…such beautiful rhyme ✨❤️💫
That’s so nice to hear, Navin. Thanks so much.💕
You’re welcome, Grace ✨❤️💫
Wonderful writing Grace
Thanks so much, Chris.💕
You’re welcome
How could I ever forget that film… This is beautiful, Grace. Powerful, too. 🙂
Glad you liked it, Mike. Thank you.💕
Beautiful poem, Grace! Stay blessed 🙏🙏❤️
Thanks so much, Diana.Happy you liked it, my friend.💕