The shiny sun
offers a hand,
entices me
into a dance.
The warmest ray
touches my face,
tattoos my skin
fills me with grace.
A happy tune
plays in the breeze,
moving the leaves
on swaying trees.
As wild winds sweep,
whistle and chime,
form perfect beats
that can stop time.
A stage of grass,
song without words,
just sprinkled rain,
and flapping birds.
The moisture dries
mild hues shine bright,
sun fades away
bringing moonlight.
– Grace Y. Estevez – Reddy
Originally Published September 12, 2021
This poem is calming. Isn’t nature so healing? Fall is my favorite season because that warming sun isn’t overwhelming here in North Carolina, and of course the aesthetic of trees and fall leaves draw me in. This poem makes me want to take a trail walk today. Thanks, Grace of the Sun…
Thank you so much. It sure is. A trail walk sounds wonderful today. I’m in NC too and the weather is so perfect today. Enjoy.💕
That’s a beautiful poem, capturing the essence of a sunny day’s transition into a peaceful night. Thanks for sharing dear Grace. ❤
Thanks a bunch, my dear friend. Happy you enjoyed it.💕🙏💕
My pleasure 💕
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beautiful as always, Grace.
As wild winds sweep,
whistle and chime,
form perfect beats
that can stop time. 🤍🙏🤍
Thanks so much, Destiny 💕🙏💕
most welcome 🤍🙏
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A wondrous approach to the gift of the Sun…”offering a hand to dance”
Glad you enjoyed it, my friend. Thank you 💕
Always a pleasure Grace. Cheers!
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A beautiful poem Grace 🌹
Thank you so much 💕
You’re always welcome
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Your words are soothing and uplifting Grace 😘
Thanks so much 💕
Always a pleasure Grace 💕🤗
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The presentation of nature is just amazing Grace👌😊
Thank you so much 💕
this one speaks to me too, just got such a good feeling while reading it!! well said, Grace🙏🏼❤️thank you❤️🙏🏼
So nice to hear. Thank you so very much.💕
simply beautiful
Thank you 💕
Beautiful, uplifting and tranquil Grace! Very nice my friend. 🤗💖😍🥂🥰
Thanks a bunch, my friend.💕
Oh my dear Grace, you are sooooo very welcome! 🥰💞😍
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nice poem
Thanks so much 💕
Beautiful
Thank you 💕
Welcome
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Very nice imagery and composite. I can see it and feel it. Nature is inspiring.
Thank you so much. It sure is 💕
Your words are so beautiful and are becoming g me to start my day! Beautiful Grace!
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Thank you so much, dear Cindy 💕
You’re so welcome Grace!💕
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That is a very soothing poem Grace!
Have a great day!
Thanks so much. Have a great one too. 💕
This poem beautifully captures the essence of nature’s dance, depicting the sun as a welcoming partner enticing you into a graceful, rhythmic movement. The imagery of the sun’s warm rays touching your face, leaving a mark of grace, paints a vivid picture of the sun’s gentle caress. The portrayal of the happy tune playing in the breeze, moving the leaves and creating a melody with the swaying trees, evokes a sense of harmony and tranquility.
The description of wild winds sweeping, whistling, and chiming, forming perfect beats that seem to suspend time, adds a layer of intensity to the natural symphony. The imagery of a stage made of grass, a song without words, sprinkled rain, and flapping birds creates a picturesque scene, immersing the reader in the beauty of the moment.
The transition from day to night is depicted elegantly, as the sun fades away, making room for the gentle glow of moonlight. The poem captures the cyclical nature of the day and night, symbolizing the eternal dance of time and nature. Overall, this poem is a delightful celebration of the harmonious relationship between humans and the natural world. Well done!
What an amazing response. Thank you so very much. Your lines write a poem on their own. Beautiful . Truly appreciate you.💕
What a nice feeling about the sun and nature! Love it, Grace 😊💖
Thanks so much, KK.💕
Welcome, Grace 💖
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Beautiful, filled with soul enriching imagery 😊💕🙏
Thank you so much.💕
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A beautiful and calming poem expressing the beauty of nature. 💖
Happy you liked it, Eugenia. Thank you.💕
My pleasure, Grace.
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Such a beautiful poem…that brings calmness & the healing nature of nature…magnificently written, my dear friend ✨💜💫
Thank you so very much, Navin. Glad you enjoyed.💕
You’re welcome, dear Grace ✨💜💫
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Beautiful poem
Thanks so much 💕
Absolutely beautiful, Grace! 💞💞💞 Nothing like a ray of sun to warm you to your bones 💞💞💞
Thanks so much, Dawn.💕
It’s just amazing the way you write 💕
Si sweet of you. Thank you so much 💕