In a vast and endless plain,
infinite as the blue sky,
lets remove imposed restrain,
allow our free souls to fly.
In an ocean dense and wide,
wider than the universe,
we create the strongest boat
so our souls can reassert.
Darkest black colored plateau,
made so dark it almost shines,
our hearts paint a loving home,
chalky white and well refined.
Letting joy fuel our drive,
end the night, avoiding time.
We will skip, then jump and dive,
dancing to loud inner chimes.
Twinkling like a bright jewel,
nothing can obstruct our view.
Build a world made of our rules,
formed to please both me and you.
As we shimmer more than stars,
winded lovers become one.
Felt devotion near and far,
sleeping soundly with the sun.
– Grace Y. Estevez- Reddy
This is amazingly written with divine powers of words. Lovely dear Grace. Especially this stanza.
Twinkling like a bright jewel,
nothing can obstruct our view.
Build a world made of our rules,
formed to please both me and you.
Thatโs so sweet of you, Suma. Thanks a bunch, my dear friend.๐
This is simply divine, my dear Grace. What a beautiful piece! I absolutely love that final stanza, such a mesmerizing ending. Amazingly written, friend! You shine so bright ๐ค๐ค๐ซ
Thatโs so very nice to hear, my dear friend. Thanks so much.๐
Amazingly beautiful, Grace. I love this poem. โค๏ธ
Iโm so glad you loved it, dear Jeff. Thanks a bunch.๐
Loved it much. Welcome bunches. โค๏ธโค๏ธ
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Wow, another beautiful poem!๐โค
Thank you so much, Aaysid. I truly appreciate your kind support.๐
You are most welcome. โค
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Amazing piece, Grace. You never cease to amaze and brighten my morning with your words. <3
I truly appreciate your kindness, Lauren. Thanks so very much.๐
Youโre most welcome, Grace. Thank you too. ๐ ๐
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This is so uniqueโฆ really love what youโve written. โค๏ธ
Thanks so much. Happy you liked it.โค๏ธ
Youโre welcome ๐
Oh, Grace…wow. Impressive, ma’am!
Happy you liked it.Thanks so much, Eleanor.๐
Nice
Thanks so much.๐
This is so divine, Grace! Really impressive! The ending of your piece are always so mesmerizing. Loved this so much โคโค
Iโm thrilled to hear that, AB. I truly appreciate your kind support. Thanks so much.๐
I loved it. Beautifully written. Your writing as always is wonderful..! Unique one.
Thank you so very much.I truly appreciate your kind support.๐
Oh wow, this is so stunning. Every single line carries a whole lot of depth.
As we shimmer more than stars,
winded lovers become one.
Felt devotion near and far,
sleeping soundly with the sun.
You always manage to impart your bright light through your unique and divine poems . Truly loved it.
This makes me so happy, Aanchal. Thanks so much.๐
Gorgeous! If perfection were a poem, this is what it would look like! Divinely beautiful! ๐ค
I appreciate your kind words so much, Sam. Thank you so very much.๐
Wow.. This was so perfect! I love the last stanza.. It brings it all together in a most beautiful wayโค๏ธโค๏ธ๐น
Thanks so very much, Diana. I truly appreciate your kind support.Much love to you.๐๐๐
ยซAs we shimmer more than stars,
winded lovers become one.
Felt devotion near and far,
sleeping soundly with the sun.ยป
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Thanks a bunch, Coco.๐๐๐๐ฅฐโค๏ธ
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A perfectly blended poem, Grace. The verses like..dancing to loud inner chimes..and sleeping soundly with the sun..are simply wonderful. Loved it.๐๐๐
Happy to hear that, dear KK. Thanks so much.๐๐๐
You’re welcome ๐
Nice poem. God bless.
Thank you so very much. Blessings to you as well.โค๏ธ