Utopia

In a vast and endless plain,
infinite as the blue sky,
lets remove imposed restrain,
allow our free souls to fly.

In an ocean dense and wide,
wider than the universe,
we create the strongest boat
so our souls can reassert.

Darkest black colored plateau,
made so dark it almost shines,
our hearts paint a loving home,
chalky white and well refined.

Letting joy fuel our drive,
end the night, avoiding time.
We will skip, then jump and dive,
dancing to loud inner chimes.

Twinkling like a bright jewel,
nothing can obstruct our view.
Build a world made of our rules,
formed to please both me and you.

As we shimmer more than stars,
winded lovers become one.
Felt devotion near and far,
sleeping soundly with the sun.

– Grace Y. Estevez- Reddy

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  1. This is amazingly written with divine powers of words. Lovely dear Grace. Especially this stanza.

    Twinkling like a bright jewel,
    nothing can obstruct our view.
    Build a world made of our rules,
    formed to please both me and you.

  2. This is simply divine, my dear Grace. What a beautiful piece! I absolutely love that final stanza, such a mesmerizing ending. Amazingly written, friend! You shine so bright πŸ–€πŸ€—πŸ’«

  3. This is so divine, Grace! Really impressive! The ending of your piece are always so mesmerizing. Loved this so much ❀❀

  4. Oh wow, this is so stunning. Every single line carries a whole lot of depth.
    As we shimmer more than stars,
    winded lovers become one.
    Felt devotion near and far,
    sleeping soundly with the sun.
    You always manage to impart your bright light through your unique and divine poems . Truly loved it.

  5. Wow.. This was so perfect! I love the last stanza.. It brings it all together in a most beautiful way❀️❀️🌹

  6. Β«As we shimmer more than stars,
    winded lovers become one.
    Felt devotion near and far,
    sleeping soundly with the sun.Β»
    πŸ˜βœπŸ»πŸ‘πŸ»πŸ™ŒπŸ»marvelous

  7. A perfectly blended poem, Grace. The verses like..dancing to loud inner chimes..and sleeping soundly with the sun..are simply wonderful. Loved it.πŸ‘ŒπŸ˜ŠπŸ’–

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