A gift or curse? What would you say?
All spells reverse, magic conveys.
An act so cruel, yet well received,
bends every rule that hearts believe.
Connection felt to mother earth,
made old days melt, for her rebirth.
Deep rooted source became alive,
old withered force swiftly revived.
For once so still, no one around,
her own strong will, muted all sounds.
Pure peace exposed by warm sun rays,
whole and composed, in full display.
At last attached to all that is,
all holes now patched, no need for limbs.
Serene breeze sings, time chimes away,
fixed like a tree clearing all days.
A curse or gift? What do you think?
The perfect shift, within a blink.
Vital to life in every sense,
intent for strife, helped love dispense.
– Grace Y. Estevez – Reddy
Lovely poem Grace.
Thanks so much, Sadje.π
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This is me.
Happy to hear that.π
A gorgeous contemplation, Grace. π
Thanks so much, Jeff. I am so happy you liked it.π
Youβre most welcome, Grace. Always. π
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Beautiful imagery Grace π€π
Thanks so much, Ivor.π
Youβre welcome Grace π€π
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A wonderful piece, Grace!
Thanks so much, Shruthi.π
A mysterious and magical poem. Quite unique. I like the questions posed.
Im so happy you liked it, Suzette. Thank you so much.π
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Thought-provoking and beautifully written, Grace!
Thank you so much, dear Eugenia.π
My pleasure, Grace.
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This is a thought provoking piece raising so many issues. Well penned, Grace! I liked it ππ
So happy to hear that, my friend. Thank you.π
My pleasure, my friend π
As always, excellent writing. I’ll take the gift in the cycle of life.
Fraternal hugs.
Thank you so much, dear friend. Truly appreciate it.π
Uplifting, Grace! As always. ^_^
So happy you enjoyed it, Joyce. Thank you π
Of course. Your works always brighten my day.
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A gift and a curse is so often indistinguishable. What you think is what it is.
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I just love the flow of your poetry, I really do.
So happy to hear that. Thanks so much. Truly appreciate it.π
mesmerizing. perfect shift within a blink, yes! those happen and it needs more acknowledgement. thank you for this piece, Grace. i enjoyed it.
Happy to hear that, Audrine. Thank you π
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Lovely poem! Such beautiful language. Have you heard of Amazon Createspace? You can self-publish books there. I used it to publish my poetry. Itβs easy to use and user-friendly