Between the lines, a sacred place,
while living in a spinning maze.
One world that floats without a base,
another formed by time and space.
Living in two worlds intertwined,
one is determined and defined,
the other not all eyes can find,
but still exists and flows divine.
Living in two worlds at one time,
without a clue, reason, or rhyme.
Where strong instinct push every climb,
a sense of wholeness feels sublime.
Living in two worlds is a lot,
both carry with a distinct plot,
to untie one creates a knot,
so bitter cold or scolding hot.
Living in two worlds as they merge,
aware that positive will serge,
one place where negative thoughts purge,
so hearts and souls meet and converge.
Within one world it feels the same,
the dreams hearts bury, feed the flame.
Stand clear to focus on the aim,
hold true felt wishes, then reclaim.
– Grace Y. Estevez – Reddy
Thank you, Grace, I like the message!
Joanna
Happy you liked it, Joanna. Thank you.π
The images and the words combined brilliant.
And still your number 1
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Living in two worlds,
We all areπ so true
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Can you help me understand how the floating world isnt just my imagination?
It may be imagined for some, for me the floating world carries a very deep feeling that has revealed itself multiple times with precise timing. Hope you have a wonderful day.π
Oh no, I imagined god as a person not a place
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Wow I really liked it β€οΈ
Thank you. So happy you enjoyed .π
Oh yes, ‘living in two worlds at one time’ lovely!
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Really cool poem. I too feel part of two worlds. Maybe more!π . βI was of three minds, Like a tree. In which there are three blackbirds.β Wallace Stevens β βThirteen Ways of Looking at a Blackbird
Thanks so much. Wonderful.π
The world of my mind seems the more real, especially realising what I know of any world is all in my mind.
Wow, what an incredible piece and picture. Thank you for sharing, Grace!
Happy you enjoyed it, Joyce. Thanks so much.π
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Such a thought provoking poem Grace. It really is true that we live in two worlds! One physical and one spiritual.
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I love the idea of living in two worlds. And how you make it all rhyme is amazing.
So glad you liked it. Thanks so much.π
Beautifully written Grace β€οΈ absolutely loved it.
Happy you liked it, Kirti. Thanks so much.π
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This such a thoughtful and powerful pieceπ Loved and enjoyed reading thisπ
So happy you enjoyed it, my friend. Thanks so much.π
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The two worlds! Beautifully depicted, Grace! So real and genuine! Awesome piece πππ
Thanks so much, my friend . So glad you enjoyed .π
It was truly my pleasure π
Brilliantβ€
Thanks so much .π
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This is a great theme that many have lived. I love this beautiful way you’ve put it. Simply stunning to read. πβ π
Delighted to hear you enjoyed. Thanks so much.π
You’re most welcome βΊ
I like your thoughts π
Happy to hear that. Thanks so much.π
Beautiful βοΈπΉ
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You are most deservedly welcome
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