Life in this place,
is just a play,
an aimless chase,
and endless sway.
Mask on a face,
taking up space,
finding a pace
to win the race.
Eyes fill with grace,
hearts feel displaced,
still interlace
to then erase.
Life in this place,
can feel so gray,
daydreams are glazed,
all goals encased.
Another day
to be defaced,
or to retrace,
change underway.
Warm morning rays,
hopes are displayed,
pure brightness stays,
starting today.
– Grace Y. Estevez – Reddy
Grace, this is amazing!
Loved itπ₯°
I am so happy this is so, Dera. Thank you.π
What a wonderful way to start the day, thank you!
So nice to hear.Thanks so very much.π
Today is always the best time to start and I love how your final stanza embodies that!
Absolutely, Jaya.Thank you so much.π
You’re such a great writer! Love it.
Thanks so much, AC. Truly appreciate your kindness.π
I hope you last verse is prophetic!
Joanna
I hope so too. Thank you, Joanna.πππ
Please do consider reciting one of your poems…I love the flow of this one, Grace β¨β€οΈπ«
I am so glad to hear that you enjoyed it, dear Navin. Thank you. I will definitely consider it, my friend .π
I’m glad that you’ll consider it, my friend…thank you β¨β€οΈπ«
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Oh Grace, this is such a lovely read… From reality to hope. I adore it and your effortless rhyme π
I am so happy to hear that. Thank you so very much.Truly appreciate it.π
So beautiful Grace with hope in the new year we so need! π
Yes, Hope is always appreciated. Thanks so much, my friend.π
Absolutely!!! πππ·
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Realistic and uplifting, Grace. Thank you π
Thanks so much, Liz.Glad you enjoyed.π
I find it hard to rhyme this beautifully and perfectly! You’ve done a pretty great job at it ! This is too good ! π₯°π
I am so glad you liked it, Ashi. Thanks you so much. This truly means a lot to me.π
‘Another day to be defaced’ powerful poetry, friend. I love the way the sun refocuses and repurposes the speaker. Wonderful widsom.
So nice to hear that you enjoyed it, K. Thank you so much.πβ€οΈπ
Youβre very welcome. You bring warmth to every day. π
Thatβs so sweet of you to say, dear K. Thank you so very much.πππ
Thanks, Grace, for the hope you always offer in your words. It makes a difference. π
This makes me so happy. Thanks so much, Mike.π
Wonderful verse, Grace. Is so beautiful. ππ
Glad you enjoyed, my friend. Thank you.π
You’re most welcome, Grace. Always. π
It’s a crazy life we live indeed, but what a radiant and charming poem! π
Thank you so much, Lamittan.Truly appreciate your kind words.π
You’re most welcome, Grace π
The rhythm was so fabulous on this one! I also loved the title. Beautifully expressedβ€
Thank you so much, Jan.Happy you enjoyed it.π
“Warm morning rays,
hopes are displayed,
pure brightness stays,
starting today.” Gorgeous writing, Grace. Loved this poem with my whole heartβ€π
So happy this is so, Suvi. Thank you.πππ
You’re so welcomeπ₯°
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Stunning poem, my friend! The last stanza is super hopeful and optimistic. Youβve beautifully shown us the βtasteβ of life in recent times.
I appreciate your kind feedback, Sam. Thank you so much.πππ
Last stanza spoke to me deeply. Thank you for your beautiful words! Blessings!
So happy to hear that, Carla. Thank you.π
It was so beautifully penned!
Loved it! π
So happy to hear that. Thanks so much, Maria.ππ
Pleasure π
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This is one of your best poems, Grace! Today is the best day to start. Well penned ππ
I’m thrilled to hear this, dear KK. Thanks a bunch, my friend .π
Always welcome, Grace π
Always (re)turn to Nature! Great verse, really liked this one. π
So glad you liked it. Thank you so much.π
Beautiful verse, Grace!
“Mask on a face,
taking up space,
finding a pace
to win the race.”
This spoke to me a lot. Your words always create such otherworldly magic, it’s so so good. Loved this β€β€
Thatβs so nice to hear , AB. Thanks so much.π
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This is just Amazingly expressed..πΉπΉπΉ
Thanks so much.π
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