Your eyes shout loud, with silent words,
making all logic seem absurd,
your clear message I have now heard.
fluttering by, like a sweet bird.
Your eyes wear hidden, unseen smiles,
a mesmerizing, aloof style.
Lost hopes and thoughts create a pile,
I analyze you for a while.
Your eyes both carry a still dance,
guiding me swiftly into a trance,
forcing my will to take a chance,
I slip and fall hitting romance.
Your eyes then make me feel at ease,
their light and wisdom turn my key,
angel wings unfold, expand free,
feathery dance within the breeze.
Your eyes give me my full control,
help me escape out of this mold,
feeling complete, finally whole,
soft lullabies play from our soul.
– Grace Y. Estevez-Reddy
I love this! The repetition of “Your eyes” makes it so powerful and dreamy. The flow here is so beautifully graceful! Amazingly written as always, my friend!!! I’m inspired 🖤🤗
Thank you so much Ace. You inspire me as well. Your words and support truly mean so much to me.❤️
Your 5-stanzas comprising your poem is poetic incredible an uncut *Gem*
Thank you so much! I am so glad you liked it.❤️