Beneath the sky, peacefully gray,
an old man sits, to end the day.
Great wisdom sets his weathered face,
a threadbare coat, outlived by grace.
Black plastic bag slumps at his feet,
secrets kept in silence, discreet.
Beside him, in a hint of shade,
tiny cat rests, friendship is made.
Acknowledgement, with patient eyes,
watching the world that slowly flies.
Tail curled in a half closed loop,
sweet moment in the twilight stoop.
The bench is worn, like hands that shake,
cracked wood remembers each small ache.
It holds him still, it bears his weight,
as time pools round like water, fate.
Held gaze is cast to distant right,
where colors bloom in shades of light.
There, in a hush of pale lagoon,
where breezes hum a forgotten tune.
Flamboyance stands with fragile pride,
flamingos drifting, side by side.
Their mirrored stare, their painted plume,
contrasts the bench, brightens up gloom.
Around them, trees in tangled mass,
rise like tall walls where shadows pass,
fortress of green, so lush and tight,
cloaking the edge of true insight.
The cat beneath, he sits above,
all silent aches, reach out for love.
Yet there they are, in dusk’s embrace,
relaxing in their happy place.
– Grace Y. Estevez – Reddy
Response to Sadje’s picture prompt on What Do You See # 289 May 20, 2025
This weeks prompt offered two picture options. This poem was inspired by both pictures. 💕



This so beautiful and painted a picture in my mind ✨️
Thanks so much, Elsie. 💕
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Wonderful, Grace. I especially like, “all silent aches, reach out for love.”
Thanks so much, Mary. So happy you enjoyed and that line in particular. 💕
Wonderful poem
Thanks so much.💕
Each word captures the essence of aging and the words chosen and images used truly are outstanding! Love the cracked bench, the pools of water, green and cat. I saw a woman just now in an alleyway that 🩷definitely could use a poem. I may try to draw some inspiration from your amazing words.🩷
Thank you so very much, Cindy. Your thoughtful response placed a smile on my face. Truly appreciated, my friend. Have a great day. 💕
You’re so very welcome, Grace. Oh good, I’m glad to hear that! Thanks a bunch and happy Wednesday 🩷
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You did a wonderful job bring your words to life, Grace. Everything pops! Such a lovely read!
Thank you so much, Nancy. Happy you enjoyed, my friend. Have a great day. 💕
Very welcome, Grace!
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Absolutely outstanding, heartfelt, and I love how you successfully blended the two prompt photos, Grace. The last verse is full of hope. Well done.
Thanks a million, SWuzette. Delighted to know you enjoyed it, my friend. Have a beautiful day. 💕
You are very welcome, Grace. Blessings to you.
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Beautifully done, Grace! 👏
Thanks so much, T. 💕
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Poignant, Grace. A lovely image you paint with your words..
Thanks so much, Ryan 💕
Your poetry captures the essence of our humanity. Thank you for sharing.
So sweet of you. Thank you so much 💕
So many beautiful lines
Favourite—
“Around them, trees in tangled mass,
rise like tall walls where shadows pass,”
Thanks so much 💕
It’s a celebration of the small and the quiet. The old man and the cat—both marginal figures—become symbols of resilience and tenderness. And in that “space in time,” pain finds solace, and life, a respite.
Best regards, friend Grace. 🤗👏✨
Thanks so much, my friend. Have a wonderful day.💕
Grace this is so beautifully written my friend. Very moving and heartwarming poem. Thanks for joining in.
Thank you so much, Sadje. Glad you enjoyed, my friend. Have a wonderful day.💕
You’re very welcome my friend
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What an amazing take on the prompt, Grace. Your detailed interpretation is outstanding. 💕
Thanks so much, Eugi. Glad you enjoyed. Have a beautiful day.💕
Most welcome, Grace!
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Awww dear Grace, what a soul stirring poetry. Picture perfect for the prompt ♥️♥️♥️you are awesome in your knowledge 🙏
So sweet of you, my friens. Thank you so much, Suma. Truly appreciate you. 💕
A moving poem, Grace! I loved the way you chose to blend the two emotions. Well done 👍💗
So happy you enjoyed it, my friend. Thanks a bunch, KK.💕
It’s truly my pleasure, Grace💞💞
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What an exceptional job you did by vividly describing each picture, and incorporating the flamingos in with the older gentleman picture. Lovely job Grace 🤩👏 You are so talented. ✨
So nice to hear that you enjoyed . Thank you so very much for your kind response. Truly appreciated.💕🙏💕
You are most welcome 🤗 💕
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cute kitty
Thanks Art 💕
You make me long to join them. Beautifully written, Grace! 💞💞💞
So nice to hear, Dawn. Thank you so much. Have a wonderful day.💕
Beautiful Grace❤️
Thanks so much 💕
You’re welcome!
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