Space in Time

Beneath the sky, peacefully gray,
an old man sits, to end the day.
Great wisdom sets his weathered face,
a threadbare coat, outlived by grace.

Black plastic bag slumps at his feet,
secrets kept in silence, discreet.
Beside him, in a hint of shade,
tiny cat rests, friendship is made.

Acknowledgement, with patient eyes,
watching the world that slowly flies.
Tail curled in a half closed loop,
sweet moment in the twilight stoop.

The bench is worn, like hands that shake,
cracked wood remembers each small ache.
It holds him still, it bears his weight,
as time pools round like water, fate.

Held gaze is cast to distant right,
where colors bloom in shades of light.
There, in a hush of pale lagoon,
where breezes hum a forgotten tune.

Flamboyance stands with fragile pride,
flamingos drifting, side by side.
Their mirrored stare, their painted plume,
contrasts the bench, brightens up gloom.

Around them, trees in tangled mass,
rise like tall walls where shadows pass,
fortress of green, so lush and tight,
cloaking the edge of true insight.

The cat beneath, he sits above,
all silent aches, reach out for love.
Yet there they are, in dusk’s embrace,
relaxing in their happy place.

– Grace Y. Estevez – Reddy

Response to Sadje’s picture prompt on What Do You See # 289 May 20, 2025

This weeks prompt offered two picture options. This poem was inspired by both pictures. 💕

56 thoughts on “Space in Time

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  1. Each word captures the essence of aging and the words chosen and images used truly are outstanding! Love the cracked bench, the pools of water, green and cat. I saw a woman just now in an alleyway that 🩷definitely could use a poem. I may try to draw some inspiration from your amazing words.🩷

  2. It’s a celebration of the small and the quiet. The old man and the cat—both marginal figures—become symbols of resilience and tenderness. And in that “space in time,” pain finds solace, and life, a respite.

    Best regards, friend Grace. 🤗👏✨

  3. A moving poem, Grace! I loved the way you chose to blend the two emotions. Well done 👍💗

  4. What an exceptional job you did by vividly describing each picture, and incorporating the flamingos in with the older gentleman picture. Lovely job Grace 🤩👏 You are so talented. ✨

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