I wandered far through evening dust,
without a map, just silent trust.
Cool winds whisper through scented pines,
hidden riddles and secret signs.
Under the moon, lavender hues,
wild flowers wept with drops of dew,
I found it there, glimmer so small,
half buried near an ancient wall.
A lens of glass, felt strangely warm,
it felt as though it held a storm.
I raised it gently to my eye,
witnessed magic reshape the sky.
Enchanted optical stood clear,
the earth turned soft and drew me near.
No sorrows touched the children’s play,
night could not steal the song from day.
Rivers laughed loud in crystal light,
mountains stood tall with humble might.
Each face I saw, serene, unscarred,
free hearts unchained, all spirits starred.
What is this place? A dream or spell?
a truth the broken seldom tell?
I gasped, then wept, not out of pain,
but wonder I could not contain.
I slowly lowered lens from sight,
the world returned to shade and fright.
Deep in my soul, the vision stayed,
a map of what could be, if made.
Now through that glass I sometimes see
not just this life, but what could be,
pray all new steps taken are blessed,
to bring that vision into rest.
– Grace Y. Estevez – Reddy
Moonwashed Weekly Challenge May 20, 2025
Prompt – Lens/ Eye/ Magic/World


Your poem takes us on a delightful journey to what can be, Grace.
Thank you so much, Mary. Truly appreciated. 💕
A beautiful poem my friend
Thanks so much, dear Sadje. Have a wonderful day 💕
You’re most welcome 💜🙏🏼💜
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Such a beautiful poem! 💗
Thanks so much, T💕
You’re most welcome. ❤️
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Beautiful 💕
Thanks so much 💕
Oh this is such a wonderful prayer in a poem with a lens I will remember to bath in often, Grace. Beautifully crafted! 💕
Thanks so much, Cindy. So happy you enjoyed, my friend. Truly appreciate you.💕
“Now through that glass I sometimes see
not just this life, but what could be,
pray all new steps taken are blessed,
to bring that vision into rest”
Powerful lines, brilliant finish to a great poem. I like the note of positivity on which the poem ends.
Thank you so very much, my friend. Truly appreciate your kind support, Benjamin. Glad you enjoyed.💕
You’re welcome dear ♥️
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Wonderful! I love it!
Thank you so very much, my friend.💕
Wonderful imagery. I love using the camera lens, which usually shows a small part of reality, to show what reality could potentially become.
Thank you so much. I do too. Have a wonderful day.💕
Very nice, Grace. Sometimes silent trust is all you need.
Thanks so much. Absolutely, Nancy. Have a great day.💕
Great image. I really like this poem
Thanks so much. Happy you enjoyed.💕
This is delightful, Grace! A beautiful take on the prompt, and your last verse is stunning. 💗
Thanks so much, Eugi. Happy you enjoyed, my friend. Have a great weekend. 💕
You’re welcome, Grace. And a happy weekend to you, too. 💗
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Wow! Really beautiful vision, Grace.
Thanks so much. 💕🙏💕
Wow! What a masterful poem!!! Bellissimo!!!
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Thank you so much 💕
Beautifully done, Grace! 💞💞💞 I wish everyone could look through that glass at least once. 💞
Thanks so much, Dawn. So do I, my friend.💕
This is a beautiful poem and makes you so grateful
thanks a bunch, Belladonna. 💕
You’re more than welcome!
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OH cool Grace! A magic lens that, when you look through it, makes the world perfect again. 🕊️
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