A burst of light,
flung in mid air,
a fateful sight,
to all those there.
Without a fight,
worn eyes held stares,
hearts reached new heights,
accepted dares.
The hues were bright,
rebuked despair,
fluorescent white,
instant repair.
Shines every night,
flows without care,
errors made right,
life becomes fair.
– Grace Y. Estevez – Reddy
Originally Published March 31, 2023
Bright white light – perfect
Thank you so much, Angela💕
Love this one. 🙂
Thank you so much 💕
Picture perfectly penned poem, wise words with bright verses dear Grace 👌❤
Thanks a bunch, Suma💕
A sweet pleasure 💕
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Nice one Grace love it ♥️🤝
Thanks so much. Happy you enjoyed it 💕
This is a feel good! Love this Grace
Glad you enjoyed it, Belladonna. Thank you 💕
You’re welcome!
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Love the optimism coming out of nothing that you penned so well Grace👏
Thanks so much, Cindy. Glad you liked it, my friend 💕
Your work is always a pleasure to read. Welcome so much❤️
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Beautiful lines all! I love the ideas and imagery in these lines in particular:
**The hues were bright,
rebuked despair*”
Glad you enjoyed it, my friend 💕
A pleasure, my friend. Have a wonderful rest of the evening.
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I love the first lines, “A burst of light,
flung in mid air,” We saw the start of a movie series like that. The heroine appeared to fling the light through the air and kill trollocks.
That’s wonderful. Thank you so much. Happy you enjoyed it. 💕
Your flow is ridiculous, in the absolute best way.
So nice to hear, Nicole. Thanks so much.💕
Love how you’ve ended your lovely poem Grace. Making everything right at the end. 🩷
Thank you so much, Sadje. Glad you enjoyed it.💕
You’re most welcome
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Beautiful lines! Mistakes make us right 👍
Absolutely. Thank you so much.💕
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Lovely lines, Grace! Very well penned 👍💐❤️
Thanks so much 💕
Truly my pleasure 💞
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well written and good flow
Beautiful, Grace! 💞💞💞
Thanks so much 💕