Do problems leave when senses close?
Our minds can see the unexposed.
Feelings can hear beyond disclosed,
perceptions build to then propose.
Can hearts still break if left alone?
Harden in time, turn into stone.
Form what is real from the unknown,
preventing love from being shown.
Will tears cascade with eyes shut tight?
Sealed so aligned, no room for light.
Inner warmness kiss with insight,
eyes gleam with joy, fulfilled so bright.
Do carried scents transport through time?
Happy tastebuds will clap and chime.
Guiding the soul through major climbs,
floating to when moments are prime.
Can spirits wake with just one touch?
Ego’s firm grip will free its clutch.
Highlighting life with a paintbrush,
every new day, built bright and lush.
Will silent voices softly sing?
Euphoric tones make all ears ring.
Peaceful enchantments slowly cling,
providing answers wrapped in wings.
– Grace Y. Estevez – Reddy
Great contemplative piece, Grace. I really enjoyed it xx 💕
Im so happy you liked it, Lauren. Thank you so much.💕
Brilliant flow, such a deep dive into some great concepts. Love it!
So glad you liked it. Thanks so very much.💕
You’re last stanza Grace is so awesome beautifully summarized!! 💖💖
That’s so nice to hear. Thanks so much, dear Cindy.💕
You’re sooo welcome my friend!💖
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I’m happy to hear that Grace!💖
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Wow! That is so beautiful!!👌🏻
Thanks so much.💕❤️💕
A beautifully created and delivered poem, Grace. Each stanza is full of tons of wisdom, and collectively it is stunning. ❤️❤️
That’s so nice to hear, Jeff. Thanks so much. 💕❤️💕
Most welcome. Always. ❤️🥰❤️
A moving poem with vivid imagery and wisdom, as always. Thanks for sharing your insights and talent with us, Grace. 🙂
Thank YOU so much for taking the time to read and comment. I truly appreciate it.💕❤️💕
Deep diving below the surface is where a soul resonates and learns its truths. Beautiful my friend 💜
So glad you liked it. Thank you so much.💕❤️💕
Can spirits wake with just one touch?
Ego’s firm grip will free its clutch.
This line I read deeply as it demands and deserves❤️❣️
Thank you so much, Reena.💕❤️💕
Good thought provoking questions! Beautifully dealt with. So nice, Grace 👍💐💖
So glad you liked it. Thanks so much, KK.💕
You’re always welcome 😊💖
Perfect! The question at the beginning of each stanza is very well written 🙂
Thanks so much, Vignesh.💕❤️💕