Will he ever be satisfied?
An inner force tugs him inside.
Will his hurt heart be gratified?
Once he lets his soul lead and guide.
What will he do once goals are reached?
Create a plan that can not breach.
What will he do after he peaks?
Search for adventures to then seek.
Will he feel well after he cries?
He is not sure but needs to try.
Will his despair suddenly rise?
He hopes his wishes flutter high.
What will he learn once words are read?
The many ways knowledge could spread.
What will he say with phrases said?
A new remark flies through his head.
Will he feel at rest after sleep?
Just to wake up as the same sheep.
Will his profound thoughts feel as deep?
Power his path and help him leap?
What will he find after white light?
His true self dancing ever bright.
What will he see with full insight?
A future made of pure delight.
– Grace Y. Estevez – Reddy
That image, reminds me of my grandfather when he’s contemplating his next move, lol. By the way , I had to look up “satiated” haha!
That’s too funny.🤣💕
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i sure HOPE so 🙂
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A gorgeous verse alternating with profound questions, dear Grace. Lighting up my afternoon. Wonderful. ❤️❤️❤️
That’s so kind of you to say, Jeff. Thanks so much, my friend .💕❤️💕
Beautifully written!!❤
Thank you so much.💕
I like the call-and-response nature of this poem, as hope answers doubt with a calm, grounded inner voice. This is a delightful poem. 🙂
Thanks so much, Mike. I’m glad you noticed where the questions and answers came from. I truly appreciate your kind feedback, my friend.💕
I feel like I so much needed to read something like this. This is very well crafted, in a way that only you know of. Beautifully written ❤❤
I’m so glad you liked it, AB. Thank you so much.💕🙏💕
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Mind-blowing poem, a thought provoking one. Well penned, Grace, as always 👍💐💖
Glad you liked it, KK. Thanks so much.💕
My pleasure 💖
Oh I loved this poem Grace.. I think this is a sloth yes? I’m coming back as one next life.. i think he just is.. this is such a good pondering questions we all ask.. “delight” “A future made of pure delight.”
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Yayyy! I’m happy to hear that, Cindy. I think it is a sloth, so cute. Thanks so much dear friend.💕
Oh so glad.. soooo cute.. I have a great sloth story.. but a story for another time.. 💖💖💖
Look forward to hearing. 💕❤️💕
Feels like a rendition to me, sing beautiful songs of words, to ears of men, so their mind would be whole. 💞♥️
Im so happy you found this relatable, my friend.💕
Of course, you are an art, that need to be included in school programme, I mean student should study your words.🌹💜
You are too sweet, my friend. Thanks again.💕
Don’t mention it, ♥️❤️
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Thank you