Be my prized guest,
come stroll with me,
on a dream quest,
magic journey.
Our hands will plant,
prosperity,
so wishes grant,
effortlessly.
We will have fun
without a fear,
happily run,
laugh till eyes tear.
We will then walk
around the world,
have diverse talks
till our minds twirl.
Embrace all joys,
retaining peace,
as we enjoy
feeling so free.
Let’s hope our light
can sprout and grow,
a future bright
where auras glow.
We can unite
our souls as one,
eclipse at night
melts with the sun.
Create a dome
of priceless worth,
a valued home,
heaven on earth.
– Grace Y. Estevez- Reddy
Wow Grace, this is just so beautifully weaved! I absolutely love it…this magical flow you created took me on an adventure! Stunningly done, my friend! And the rhyming is truly perfect 🙌🏻🖤🤗
So happy you liked it, my friend. Thank you so very much.❤️
marvelous🙌🏻💎✨
«We can unite
our souls as one,
eclipse at night
melts with the sun.»
Thanks, dear Coco.💕❤️🥰💕
my pleasure, dear friend😘💕
💕🙏💕
WWoooooowwwww I wanna go on a walk with you!
Lol…Thanks so much.💕
Of course!!
What a beautiful journey…
Thanks so much, Eleanor.💕
Beautifully expressed and created, dear Grace. Just lovely. ❤❤
Happy you liked it, my friend. Thanks so much.💕🙏💕
I did, indeed. Welcome, Grace. ❤️
Very nicely written 😍❤️
Thank you.💕
I would love to come along with you on that journey! Beautifully written, Grace 😊
That would be such fun, Shweta. Thanks so much, my friend.❤️
You are welcome ❤🤗😊
💕🙏💕
Love the rhythm and beautiful imagery of your poem! It’s an invitation for me to slow down and be mindful of my journey on earth, that could be a foretaste of heaven if lived with love.
That is so nice to hear, Carla. I completely agree with you. Thank you so very much.❤️
Such a beautiful piece Grace, such a wonderful journey it would be. Really loved this ❤
Thanks so much, AB.💕
❤❤
Beautiful lines!
Thank you.💕
Every word of your poem is magical ,Grace !Following lines are mesmerizing : We can unite
our souls💕 as one,
eclipse at night
melts with the sun.
Thanks! Keep creating the magic 😄
Im so glad you liked it, Dhirendra. Thank you.💕
Wow..
Amazing lines
Loved it
Thanks so much.Happy you enjoyed.💕
so beautiful Grace=.. I’ll walk with you around the spellbound earth.. lovely!💖❣️
That’s so sweet, Cindy. Thank you.💕🙏💕
You’re so welcome Grace❣️
Beautiful thoughts nicely articulated with rhyming. Very well done, Grace👍💖
I’m happy you liked it, KK. Thank you.💕
You’re welcome 🙏
Wowww!! You’re a rhyming queen dear grace!! Truly I loved this very much..! Very wonderfully Penned my dear..!🤗😍💖💕
Thank you so much, my dear friend.❤️
You’re very welcome dear 💖💖🤗
“laugh till eye tears” I just did that, this is beautiful my friend 💞
So exhilarating. Happy you had this experience, my friend . Thank you.💕
Yea, it’s a relief
💕🙏💕
Love this!
Thanks so much.💕