Jaded boy where did you go?
Did you lose part of your soul?
Did you find your self-control?
Did you get to ride life slow?
Saddened boy, were your cries loud?
Did you willy nilly vows?
Did you bury tears in clouds?
Did you entertain sad crowds?
Jilted boy did you sing songs?
After seeing you were wrong?
Ever after was prolonged,
haunting spirits felt so strong.
Graceful beauty always missed,
peaceful essence formed your kiss.
I repaid you with both fists,
now my penance lives with this.
Remember how hard you prayed,
regret mistakes ego made,
now accept the part I played,
eternal remorse cascade.
Never wonder how I am,
I am stuck in my own jam,
live happy create grand slams,
lion hearts can live in lambs.
– Grace Y. Estevez – Reddy
Moonwashed Weekly Challenge #135 – March 21, 2023
Prompt – Willy Nilly
Awwwww..! Another blissful post..!😍😍 This piece is really amazing grace, my friend… The flow was so awesome.. Loved it dear…!!💕😍✨
Thanks so much, my friend . Happy you enjoyed it.💕
My pleasure dear..❤️
This is powerful stuff, Grace. A lot of strong emotions happening here, and so well crafted, as always. What an impactful piece of poetry. *tips cap* 🙂
Happy you enjoyed it, Mike. Thanks so much, my friend .💕
This is very powerful Grace..
Thanks so much 💕
Amazing poetry. Great take on the prompt. That last verse speaks volumes…Bravo!
Thank you, Suzette . I am so glad you enjoyed it, my friend.💕
A pleasure Grace. Peace!
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wow… this is so beautifully expressed
Lovely, Grace🤍✨
Thank you so much, Destiny. So glad you liked it.💕
most welcome 🤍
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Amazing words that flow beautifully, Grace! Superb take on the prompt!💖
Thank you so much, Eugenia. Happy you enjoyed it.💕
Stunning take on the prompt Grace ❤️❤️❤️
Thank you so much.💕
WOW Grace, this is deep and so relevant. Great job with your creative spin on this prompt! 🤗✨😍
Thanks a bunch, Kym. So glad you enjoyed it.💕
You’re welcome Grace. It’s my pleasure as always my friend. 😍💖🤗🦋🥰
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such a mesmerizing and creative theme and poem!🌸
Thank you so much💕
So well written Grace.
Thank you so much, Sadje.💕
My pleasure
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Love this poem
Happy to hear that. Thank you💕
You are welcome
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Lovely 🌹
Thanks so much 💕
The last verse hit me. Very true. Great flow to this piece as week grace. Loved it. 🙌🙌💙
There is something so simply complex in the beauty behind the repentant soul in quandary. Thank you for sharing!
So glad you enjoyed it. Thanks so much.💕
Nice use of “willy nilly”; it’s such a marvelous little phrase! 🤗
Thanks so much, Nancy.💕
What a beautiful piece, dear Grace. Such strong and authentic emotion intertwined throughout. I read it forward and back and loved the flow both ways. Amazingly done as always, my friend 🤍🤗
So sweet and creative of you, Grace. Thank you so much. Always appreciate you, my friend .💕
Beautiful poem Grace!!!!
Happy you enjoyed it, Belladonna. Thank you 💕
I sure did! You’re welcome
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Beautiful poetry, Grace.
Thanks so much 💕
Pleasure 🙂.
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Wow 😳, i can feel the emotions and dedication. Keep up the good work, i was really captivated 🙌🏽
Thank you so much. Truly appreciate it.💕
Beautifully powerful poem, Grace! 💞💞💞
Thanks so much 💕
peaceful essence formed your kiss…..so emotional, so inspirational and so thoughtful! Well penned, Grace 👍❤️
Thanks a bunch, dear KK.💕
You’re always welcome 💕
This stuff is Beauty with power 😍
Thanks so much. Glad you liked it.💕