Strong links to a chain,
connections unknown,
blinded attachments,
till effects are shown.
Choices decided
outcome in the air,
stirring decisions
some may find unfair.
Power in the heart
can not be controlled,
conquering the mind
consuming the soul.
One can cause a fall,
lacking a strong will,
oblivious to pain
that cause tears to spill.
Coveting a joy
that is meant to be,
boomerangs right back
once it is set free.
– Grace Y. Estevez-Reddy
βPower in the heart
can not be controlled,
conquering the mind
consuming the soul.β – thatβs just stunning!!! This whole piece is simply incredible. I love the powerful message behind it and the universal flow to it! Well done, my dear friend!!! You never fail to blow me away with your graceful talent!!! π€π€
Thank you so much, Ace. Your awesome words and support truly hold a special place in my heart.I appreciate you very much, my friend. Much love.ππβ€οΈ
Ah, beautiful, Grace, and that last stanza is amazing, my friend! β€οΈπ€π
So happy you liked it. Thank you so very much for your thoughtful feedback and support, my friend.πππ
This is beautiful! π«π
Thank you so much .πππ
Woww!! It’s a fantastic piece. How sweet you are!!! It’s a amazing poem.. I loved it.
“Power in the heart
can not be controlled,
conquering the mind
consuming the soul.”
This is very fantastic stanza..ππ€
So happy you liked it. Thank you so much. I appreciate your kind words.πππ
Most welcome dear grace! It’s my pleasure!π
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Such a beautiful and well-articulated poem!π
Thank you so much.Happy to hear you liked it.πππ
Of course!
A very powerful poem!
Thank you, KK.ππ