Attempts to climb an endless rose,
the more he moves, the more it grows,
pretends this stem is just a rope,
slippery ride relies on hope.
Pulls up his will, as he slides down,
his big bright smile becomes a frown,
Uncompromising faith flares up,
provides the strength that fills his cup.
Thorny body transforms to steps,
making this chore feel less complex,
fragrant scents permeate the air,
somehow life starts to seem more fair.
Misty rain cures his dire thirst,
he wonders which effect came first,
to know this trail is not endless,
or ability to progress.
The last push occurred rapidly,
he finished his task happily,
reached the tip top, then felt a hug,
from his awaiting ladybug.
Two ladybugs rest on petals,
so comfortable they both settle,
difficult paths can carry gain,
determination breaks all chains.
– Grace Y. Estevez – Reddy
Moonwashed Weekly Challenge #132 – February 28, 2023
Prompt – Uncompromising

What a beautiful analogy Grace <3
Thank you so much💕
This is beautiful! The imagery of a rose and its thorns as steps…sublime. Amazing poetry as always, Grace. I love this!!
Delighted to hear you enjoyed it, my friend. Thanks a bunch.💕🙏💕
A pleasure always Grace. Peace.
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Love this Grace!
Thank you so much 💕
One bug marching up on March 1 is well timed work from Grace of the Sun! 🙂
It hadn’t occurred to me. Thanks for highlighting that. Glad you liked it.💕
Awww this is beautiful ♥️♥️♥️
Thanks so much, Belladonna 💕
You’re welcome!
Grace, it’s like you can see into the mind of a bug. Great photo and even better poem. 🙂
So sweet of you. Thanks so much, Marsha 💕
You are welcome. Can I call you Bug Lady???? 🙂 Hugs!
💕🤣💕 I’m actually not a fan of bugs, but make an exception for lady bugs. 💕
haha. and the puns keep flying! You have just unofficially joined my family. 🙂 No bugs needed. 🙂
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Bugs: A Love Story – I enjoyed the poem.
That would have been a good tittle for this one, Art. Thanks so much.💕
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Splendid. Every word sunk deep!
Thank you so much 💕
Beautiful take Grace.
Thank you so much , Sadje 💕
You’re most welcome
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Beautiful 🌹💚💖
Thank you so much 💕
Beautiful
Thank you 💕
Very very nice Grace!
Love the images of this poem.
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Thank you so much, Marie. So happy you enjoyed it, my friend.💕
My pleasure always Grace!
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So purposefully written, Grace! Second line itself is so inspiring that one can’t leave going till the last line. So lovely 😊❤️
Thank you so much, my friend. Reading this made me smile. Glad you liked it.💕
You’re welcome always 😊
A beautiful tribute to a lady bug, Grace! It’s as if you looked deep into their existence. Brava!💖
So glad you enjoyed, Eugenia.💕
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I adore your use of analogy.❤️
Happy to hear that, thanks so much.💕
So beautiful and inspiring Grace! I love the lady bug and rose/ thorn trio so divine!💞
Im thrilled to hear that you enjoyed it, my friend. Thank you 💕
Happy my friend!!! 💕
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Oh I absolutely love this one, dear Grace! What a fantastic piece with a lovely title. The rhythm and the flow here is so soothing to read. Amazingly done 🤍🤗
Thanks a bunch, my friend. So happy you enjoyed.💕
‘…determination breaks all chains.’ Sotrue and so beautiful poem. Delightful and enjoyable.
Thank you so much, Indira 💕
My plesure, Grace. ❤️
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Faith can definitely give you strength beyond what you thought you had! Lovely poem, Grace! 💞💞💞
So true. Well put, Dawn. Thanks so much 💕
Great piece 📌
Thanks so much 💕