Wake up and go, do what you do,
laugh like a fool, while playing cool.
Go through your day, no time to play,
as feelings sway, in disarray.
Hold a brave face, keep it in place,
another chase, an unknown race.
Good afternoon never goes soon,
horrible swoon, howl at the moon.
Another night, turn off the light,
thoughts hold too tight, sleep puts a fight.
Wake up and go, write your own show,
make your life glow, change up the flow.
Go through your day, make time to play,
watch feelings sway, enjoy sun rays.
Smile on your face, that stays in place,
no need to chase a winning race.
Good afternoon, time flies too soon,
internal swoon, hello full moon.
A better night, feeling so light,
hold pillow tight, sleep feels so right.
– Grace Y. Estevez-Reddy
I really enjoyed the evolution of the poem here. Nice themes, nice gentle changes. Very pleasant to behold.
Thank you for your thoughtful appreciation, Masa.❤️💕🙏
“Wake up and go, write your own show,
make your life glow, change up the flow.” – that is AMAZING!!!! This whole piece is incredibly well written. And the rhyming is literally perfect! I love the flow here and the journey you created through your words!!! Marvelously done, my friend 🖤🤗🤍
I’m so happy you enjoyed it Ace. Thanks so much for your kind and thoughtful words.They hold great weight in my heart.Much love my friend.❤️💕🙏
“laugh like a fool, while playing cool.” That’s funny. I love it.
Lol…Glad you enjoyed.❤️💕
Your thoughts played with the Poem cool while you asleep holding the pillow tight under the Moon light.
Lovely as usual dear Grace 🙂💖
Thank you so very much Suma. I truly appreciate your kind words my friend.❤️
You are very welcome my friend 🥰💖
A very beautiful and soft piece, Grace. Stay blessed dear.🤗 🙏🌻❤️
Thank you so much Diana. Much love to you.❤️