Wake up and go,
do what you do,
laugh like a fool,
try to play cool.
Go through the day,
no time to play,
emotions sway,
in disarray.
Hold a brave face,
keep it in place,
another chase,
an unknown race.
Good afternoon,
never too soon,
horrible swoon,
howl at the moon.
Another night,
turn off the light,
thoughts hold too tight,
slumber picks fight.
Wake up and go,
love what you do,
a happy fool,
naturally cool.
Go through this day,
make time to play,
emotions sway,
enjoy sun rays.
Bright smiling face,
that stays in place,
no need to chase,
effortless race.
Good afternoon,
time flies too soon,
internal swoon,
hello full moon.
A better night,
peaceful and light,
hold pillow tight,
slumber wins fight.
– Grace Y. Estevez – Reddy
Moonwashed Weekly Challenge #152 – July 18, 2023
Prompt – Slumber


Excellent take. Enjoyed the rush of the words and emotions
Thank you so much, Sadje.💕
You’re most welcome
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I love this! Excellent rhythmic piece. 💖
Thank you so much, Eugi.💕
You’re welcome, Grace! 💖
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You nailed how I went through my past few days and nights! It was a good read for me. Thank you!
Happy you enjoyed it. Thanks so much 💕
This made me happy and full of energy. Love this Grace.
Happy to hear that, Belladonna. Thank you so much.💕
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Very energetic Grace and the form really enhanced it 😊
Glad you liked it. Thanks so much.💕
There is such freedom expressed in your poem, Grace. Well done!!
Thank you so much, Suzette. Glad you enjoyed it.💕
Always a delight, Grace! Cheers.
Cheers, my friend.💕
Different perspective makes a different day.
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Loved the tone, play and cadence in your poem Grace!!
Oh time and sleep… did you write this for me? Hahaha
“Another night,
turn off the light,
thoughts hold too tight,
slumber picks fight.”
Maybe I’ll sleep tonight …I need to with the babies and birth coming soon. 💕
Thank you so much, Cindy. Yes, you definitely need lots of rest before the babies arrive. Hope you get a peaceful and restful sleep.💕
You’re so very welcome dear Grace and yes I will work on that💞 Thanks dear friend
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Wake up and go,
love what you do,…..
and slumber will follow. Loved this poem, Grace, well crafted 👏💖
Thanks so much, KK 💕
My pleasure, always 💕
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Clever! The rush of words match the rush in the image and described in the poem!
Glad you liked it. Thanks a bunch. 💕
I love this juxtaposition. Great piece and very insightful!
Thanks so much. Glad you liked it 💕
You’re welcome!
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Absolutely love the contrast between the two days, Grace…and the similar cadence reminds us all to choose how we want our day to go! 💞💞💞
Thank you so much, Dawn. Absolutely 💕
Nicely written Grace.
Thank you so much 💕
A nice idea Grace.
Two ways of living.
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Thanks so much, my friend. Absolutely 💕
Good words….
Thank you so much 💕