Enslaved by distrust,
hidden to survive.
Heart enlaced with rust,
half dead, half alive.
Numbed to all the pain,
seasoned by betrayal.
Pure loss always gains,
dreams were made to fail.
Cries without a tear,
screams but no one hears,
cover his own ears,
to shelter deep fears.
Face falls to the ground,
slowly looks around,
Wears his masks so proud,
adjusts tilted crown.
Character greets death,
no need to endure,
takes a profound breath
instantly assured.
Stands on his two feet,
holds head in the air,
inner force defeats,
then tempts him to dare.
Knows way deep inside
he should start anew,
Worn heart opens wide,
cradles brighter views.
– Grace Y. Estevez – Reddy
Written for FFFC #228 hosted by Fandango
It is a difficult image to write for but you did it so well Grace
Thank you so much, Sadje. I enjoyed the challenge.💕
My pleasure
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I totally agree, Sadje. Great job, Grace.
Thanks so much, dear Suzette.💕
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Starting anew is always admirable. Again and again until we get it right. Thanks, Grace.
Absolutely, not always easy, but so worth it, Michael.💕
so lovely, Grace.
… always ending with hope 🙏🤍
Thank you so much, Destiny. I try.💕🙏💕
and it is appreciated.🌹
most welcome 🤍
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Really want to comment but don’t know what to write it left me speechless
So nice to hear, my friend. Thank you so much.💕
Stunning take on the image Grace 💕
Happy you enjoyed it. Thank you so much.💕
My pleasure Grace 💕
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Your words fit this image so well! Great work Grace!
Thank you so much, Belladonna. Delighted to hear you enjoyed it.💕
You’re so welcome!
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Deep. I love it.
So nice to hear. Thank you 💕
Well penned Grace, the darkness never stays forever. I like how you broughyse poetic light into your words:
“cradles brighter views.”
– Brilliant take on the prompt.
Oops Sorry that should say:
** brought poetic light***
Sorry for the faux pas.
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So happy you enjoyed it, my friend. Thanks a ton. Have a wonderful day.💕
Thank you Grace.
My pleasure 💕
As soon as I saw this mask I had to tap in and read this poem. It’s so intense – the idea of being half alive. Reading it more than once makes the lines read like a dance, but a risky one for sure. But I’m the end it’s like this character has a change in perspective.
Thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment, truly appreciate it.💕😊💕
Captivating.
Thank you so much 💕
Are you talking to me … Keep talking …
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What is left for me to say that hasn’t already bee said. Outstanding!
Thank you so much. Glad you liked it 💕
Now THAT, was a good poem! Lots of deep expression here! The first four lines gets you right into it. And the ending was a good twist. Thanx for such a moving piece…
So happy you enjoyed it. Thank you 💕
Thought provoking and haunting. Love the rhyme scheme here.
Thank you so much, O. D.💕
An amazing interpretation of this somewhat disturbing image, Grace. Excellently written. Xx 🌻💛
Thank you so much, dear Ellie. Happy you enjoyed it.💕
Amazing image, and equally beautiful are your verses, Grace! At times it’s better to start afresh 💖💐
Thank you so much, dear KK. I absolutely agree, starting fresh is so necessary at times.💕
You’re welcome 💖
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This is outstanding, Grace! So much depth packed into your flowing rhyme theme. Brava!
Thank you so much, Eugi. Happy you enjoyed it, my friend.💕
My pleasure, Grace!
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Wow! I love it!
Thanks so much 💕
Great picture pairing with your awesome poem Grace. I do love the words and imagery you chose to get someone’s “head on straight” and see the light. Superb writing Grace❤️
Thank you so much, my friend. Glad you liked it.💕
Beautifully written snapshot of a struggling life ending in brighter views 💞💞💞
Thanks so much, Dawn. Happy you enjoyed it.💕
Wow this was a profound read 👍🏿
Thank you so much. Glad you liked it.💕
Beautifully written Grace 💕
Thank you so much 💕
Grace, your poem is a profound portrayal of resilience and strength in the face of adversity. The imagery you’ve woven through your words is both captivating and moving. It reminds us that even in our darkest moments, hope can be found, and new beginnings await. Beautifully penned! 🌟📝
I’m so happy you enjoyed it. Thank you so much. Truly appreciate your kind words of support.💕
Grace, excellent piece!
Thank you so much.💕