A muted voice sings in your head,
the opaque words can not be read.
Loud blurry scenes live in your mind,
imagined lines left undefined.
Stardust hues create happy thoughts,
blinding both eyes from wars once fought.
Comfort your skull on silky sheets,
while all you seek is what you meet.
A glowing beam sets on your face,
shining your skin each waking day.
Sliding on rafts through streams foreseen,
living so posh, feeling so clean.
Melting my face in your deep eyes,
I meet myself, what a surprise.
All that I know, at once I see,
finding the key that lives in me.
– Grace Y. Estevez – Reddy
Originally Published March 22, 2021
Lovely poetry Grace.
** Melting my face in your deep eyes,
I meet myself, what a surprise.**
– deeply moving self knowing.
Thanks so much, dear Suzette.💕
Great composition! 💐💖
Thank you so much 💕
Lit indeed.
Thank you so much 💕
Beautiful as always.
A wonderful, musical love poem!💙
That’s the key Grace, the ability to unlock our inner self …
Absolutely. Thanks so much, Ivor.💕
You’re welcome Grace 😍
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A beautiful profound poem Grace
Happy you enjoyed it, my friend. Thank you 💕
You’re most welcome
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Love the flow of this one and last 4 lines are so touching.
Happy you enjoyed it. Thanks so much 💕
An inspiring pearl, Grace! So lovely and deep 💕💐
Thank you so much, KK.💕
You’re welcome 💖
Gorgeous thoughts so beautiful Grace❣️❣️❣️
Thank you so much, Cindy 💕
Always Grace❣️❣️❣️❣️
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Well written. I loved it ❤️. The rhyme scheme ends with the letter in the first stanza. Keep it up 👏👏👏
Thank you so much. Happy you enjoyed it.💕
Sometimes those keys are buried deep, or really good at hiding. Beautifully written, Grace! 💞💞💞
Absolutely. Thank you so much.💕