Pass the Baton (Published at Spillwords)

A little girl born without flaws,
was raised to never ask for more.
Rules made by others were her law,
dissatisfaction filled her core.

She spent her days buried in books,
while multitasking as she cooked.
Felt success would someday be hooked,
but doubted she had what it took.

As days went by, she was annoyed,
felt like a doll or a stuffed toy.
made sure all duties were employed ,
but craved for ones she could enjoy.

Secretly chose to change her ways,
in hopes to build up better days,
knowing all things turn out okay,
she hoped strong will was here to stay.

The years flew by without a pause,
self assurance caught every fall.
Pursued her dreams, crumbled big walls,
independence helped her stand tall.

She kissed her daughter on her head,
while putting old customs to bed.
Knowing her strength will now be spread,
excited for what lays ahead.

– Grace Y. Estevez – Reddy

I am so excited to announce that my poem “Pass the Baton” is now available at Spillwords Press. I would like to thank Dagmara K., and the whole team at Spillwords for publishing this poem, and for all of their continued support.

I would be so very grateful if you would go here, and like/comment as well. Thank you! 💕

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  1. Love this. Ironically, my 8 year old came up and hugged me and I kissed her on her head as I was reading that line.

  2. Grace <3 you really pull the heart strings so well ~ Love your mind !!! Congratulations and many more wins your way and always !!

  3. Powerful message, Grace! 💞💞💞 I wish every child had this baton passed to them…it takes so much strength to break free. Beautifully written! 💞

  4. Congratulations, Grace! It’s a powerful and inspiring poetic story! Well done 👏💕💐

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