Bright chances,
slipping,
through my hands.
Enhancements,
shifting,
like quicksand.
Frustrations climb,
regrets are prime,
anger soon chimes,
sorrowful times.
Advances,
living,
stagnantly.
Fear dances,
looking,
gallantly.
Afraid to fail,
all hopes in jail.
Create a tale,
so life could sail.
Inner strength,
healing,
negative.
Take a breath,
feeling,
positive.
Heart fills with light,
future is bright.
Trust my insight,
reaching new heights.
– Grace Y. Estevez- Reddy
I like what you’ve done with this piece from a structural standpoint. It makes for a dynamic reading experience. Also, as always, the content and intent are wonderful. Such fun to read you, Grace! 🙂
I’m so happy you enjoyed, Mike. Thank you so much for your kind feedback and support.💕
I love reading your poetry. It’s like you’re reading my mind.
That’s so nice to hear. Thank you so much.💕
I love this piece of you…how you’ve expressed…the transformation…you already know I love the way you rhyme…the sound, the imagery & the depth ✨❤️💫
This really touched my heart and made me smile, my friend. Thank you so much for your kindness and support.I truly appreciate it.💕❤️💕
You’re welcome, my friend…it’s an honour & my pleasure to read your beyond beautiful poetry ✨🤍💫❤️🌟
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Trust insight, always the best choice 👌 😉
Absolutely , my friend. Thanks so much.💕❤️💕
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There are so many things I love about your poetry, one of them being the fall, and then the rise back up. It’s always so poignant and lovely. Gorgeous poem, Grace. ❤️❤️❤️
That’s so nice to hear, my friend. Thanks so much.💕❤️💕
You’re welcome, Grace. Always. ❤️🥰❤️
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What ever might be the situation , rise up , you have to , that’s life —moving forward, no rewind
So are your words, –👌 inspiring
Absolutely.Thanks so very much, Reena.💕❤️💕
Oh yes. When there is trust in oneself one reaches higher and goes deeper. Love this. xoxo
I’m so happy you love it, Selma. Thanks so much for your kind support.💕
Always. And May your heart be filled with merriment this month. 🎄
You too , dear Selma 💕🙏💕
From negativity to positivity is the hallmark of your poetry. Transformation for the better. Well penned, Grace with perfect rhyming.👌💐💖
Thanks so much! I’m so touched and happy to hear it, truly means a lot. Grateful for you, friend.💕
You’re more than welcome 😊
love the imagery and rising to the top even in jail 😱…great. wonderful piece my friend!
Thank you so much, friend!!!! Truly appreciate your always sweet words, you’re amazing.💕
Oh you’re soooo welcome dear Grace. It takes being amazing to know amazing. xoxoxoxox 💖💖
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A fabulous piece! This resonates so well. The metamorphosis from negative to positive. So eloquently penned, my friend! (As always) 💖
Thanks so much!! I’m so glad to hear this, truly means a lot to me, my friend.💕
Opportunities, what you can see, sees you too. ♥️❤️
Love this, my friend. Thank you.💕
Thank you too 💞❤️
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