A mirrored screen,
closed eyes could see,
of shadow scenes,
once formed by me.
Life’s lucid dream,
soon came to be,
my soul a beam,
of energy.
Drops of extremes,
locked inner keys,
imagined schemes,
stole inner peace.
Hurt heartbeats screamed,
in agony,
killed self-esteem,
brought apathy.
Blue becalmed seas,
cleared old debris,
instantly free,
reached clarity.
Held empathy,
helped spirit gleam,
shined brilliantly,
fully redeemed.
– Grace Y. Estevez – Reddy
Moonwashed Weekly Challenge December 19, 2023
Prompt – Becalmed
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What a tranquil response to this prompt Grace. Lovely poem! 🥰💖🤗
Thank you so much, Kim. Happy you enjoyed it 💕
You are so very welcome Grace! 🥰💖🤗
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Such a beautifully penned poem of beauty, Grace❣️
Thanks so much, my friend 💕
Beautiful and inspiring Grace💖💖
Thank you, Maggie. Happy you enjoyed 💕
My pleasure Grace 💖
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“blue becalmed seas
cleared old debris” – so wonderful and uplifting. Thank you Grace,
Glad you enjoyed it, Suzette. Thank you so much, my friend.💕
Always a pleasure!!
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As always, a beautiful poem Grace 👏🏼
Thank you so much, Sadje 💕
My pleasure
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You do a little free blank form also don’t you this is very good thank you for being a writer and for allowing me to read you.
Thank you. Glad you enjoyed 💕🙏💕
simply so beautiful, Grace ✨🤍
Thanks so much, Destiny 💕🙏💕
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So lovely and calming, Grace.
“Life’s lucid dream,
soon came to be,
my soul a beam,
of energy.
Gorgeous lines. 💖
Happy you enjoyed it, Eugi. Thank you so very much 💕
My pleasure, Grace.
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An uplifting piece Grace 🙌
Thanks so much 💕
👏🏿👏🏿 lovely calm poem Grace.
Thanks so much 💕
Beautiful, Grace.
Thank you so much.💕
Your feelings embrace and captivate the soul.
Hugs, friend Grace.
Happy you enjoyed it, my friend. Thank you 💕
Beautiful and powerful poem Grace.
Thank you so much 💕
You’re welcome
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Grace, your poem is an exquisite journey, unfolding with vivid imagery and profound emotion. The transformation from shadow scenes to a soul beam is beautifully captured. The evolution through imagined schemes to inner peace and, ultimately, to clarity is so impactful.
~David
Thank you so much, David. I am delighted to hear that you enjoyed it. Truly appreciated, my friend.💕
So lovely and uplifting poem, Grace! Truly enjoyed 💖💐
Thank you so much 💕
My pleasure, my friend 💖
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Beautifully epressed, a journey of emotions.
wonderful poem of life’s intricacies and shifts of emotions always opening to finding the light. Beautifully penned, Grace❤️
Thank you so much, Cindy. So happy you enjoyed.💕
You’re so very welcome Grace!❤️ I really did❣️
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Redemption at the end of the rough waves that flows through life makes it all better in the end.
Absolutely 💕
Merry Christmas 🎄
Thank you 💕
Welcome 🙏
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Such a beautiful poem
Thank you so much 💕
Lovely!
Thanks so much.💕
Your ‘hurt heartbeats’ stanza really resonated. Beautifully done poem, Grace! 💞💞💞
Happy it resonated, Dawn. Thanks so much, my friend.💕