Fuel my heart,
ignite my mind.
Light the sparks,
as paths align.
A first breath
is reassigned.
Prior deaths
are by design.
Second chance
to rectify.
One more prance
to clarify.
I am now
what I once judged.
Promised vows
will clear past smudge.
Bashing you,
reflects on me,
painting views,
of what I see.
Walk through life,
yet once again.
Light will guide,
as I transcend.
– Grace Y. Estevez- Reddy
Moonwashed Weekly Challenge – November 01, 2022
Prompt – Trancending
Amazing take on the prompt Grace. You captured everything: the light, death, life. Marvellous piece. I love its balance of the emotional journey…not perfect…just the beingness of the living life.
That’s so nice to hear, Suzette. Thank you so much. Truly appreciate your kind response, my friend.💕🙏💕
Always a pleasure 💗
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‘Promised Vows will clear past smudge’ It is really thought worthy.
Thank you so much.💕
Great …. big discovery, explore and finding something inside You, Grace;), something different,be still creative,ride that poetic wawe !
Thanks so much.💕
Wonderful gathering of emotions and the hope we have learned from our mistakes. Stunning write, Grace.
Thank you so much, dear Eugenia. So glad you enjoyed it.💕
My pleasure, Grace!
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Yes, so true and beautifully said. Keep moving and smiling. ^_^
Thanks so much 💕
You’re very welcome.
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Wow you really summed it up beautifully Grace!! I love it!
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Great job on the prompt too.
Love these lines:
“I am now
what I once judged.
Promised vows
will clear past smudge.”
Thank you so much, Cindy. Glad you enjoyed it.💕
It’s always a gift to read and comment… welcome Gace💕
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Beautiful 💙💙
Thanks so much, Maya.💕
Beautiful poem, dear Grace. 💞
Thanks so much, Jeff.💕
You’re welcome, Grace. Always. 💞
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Beautiful poem
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Beautifully written Grace.
Thanks so much, Sadje.💕
My pleasure
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so relatable, dear friend. i’m glad i’m not the only one. truly is, the law is the law. super grateful to be reading your work.
Thank you so much. Glad you enjoyed.💕
Beautifully said!
“I am now
what I once judged.”
Quite the warning to judge less, and accept more 💞💞💞
Absolutely, Dawn. Thank you so much.💕
“..Light will guide as I transcen” A nice take, Grace! Love the essence of the poem 💗💗
Thanks so much, KK.💕
Always welcome 😊
Beautifully written! 💖
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So beautiful, the light will guide us!
Thanks so much. It sure will.💕
You’re welcome!
Love this!💚
Thanks so much 💕
That’s a bit different, a bit more daring that your other poems and I like it a LOT.
Well done Grace!
Thank you, Marie. Glad you found it daring.💕
Always in the direction of the light! Beautiful poem!
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Beautiful.
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You are most welcome, dear.
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