A little boy, made to shine shoes.
A little girl, singing the blues.
Both neglected and both abused,
without a choice but to be used.
Finding each other in sunlight,
forced to depart before the night.
Not giving up, or losing hope,
with every day learning to cope.
Enhanced each other, gaining strength,
providing love through any length.
They worked and sang, purely for tips,
escaped their lives, taking a trip.
So far away, they started new,
a unique world made to feel true.
Realizing thoughts can form their tale,
empowering sword helped them prevail.
Dying to all, yet still alive,
through chaos storms, they still survived.
Forgiving those they left behind,
not looking back, now redefined.
The life they left had made them strong.
Why should they concentrate on wrongs?
Instead, they killed all resentments,
made to forgive, not to ferment.
Focused on goals and future plans,
the kindest hearts lending their hands.
Blessed as their gains always expand,
knowing their dreams fall where they land.
– Grace Y. Estevez-Reddy
Aww, Grace how dare you cause me to shed a happy tear, lol. This is sweet. It reminds me of the journey with my very first boyfriend at age 15. We are still great friends today, lol!
Iβm so happy to hear that it resonated with you, Tammy. Thank you so much for the feedback.I truly appreciate it.πππ
Oh my, Grace. Wow. That is so powerful and beautiful, my friend. I adore this poem. β€π€β¨
Thank you so much! This truly made me smile. Happy you enjoyed it, my friend.β€οΈ
Ah, I am glad this is so; you’re welcome, Grace. Always. β€οΈ
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Wow that last line!!! This whole piece is mesmerizing! Itβs so unique and filled with Universal lessons. This one is different from your usual but still has the signature Grace-touch, a dreamy flow and is just excellent! What a beautiful storyteller you are!! You continue to make me marvel at your amazingness, keep up this incredible work! I know you will π€π€
Thanks so much, Ace!! What a lovely and inspiring compliment, my dear friend.
I appreciate your continued heart warming inspiration and support! YOU are so very kind!! I appreciate you.β€οΈ
Such a moving poem. I loved it especially the last para β€οΈ
Thank you so much, Shweta. Happy to hear you liked it.β€οΈ
Wowww! Such a powerful and beautiful and wonderful piece grace! You are amazing!ππ€
Thank you so much, Filarance. Truly appreciate it.πππ
Most welcome! Its my pleasure!
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Dreams fall where they land. Loved this line. Amazing!
So glad you liked it. Thank you so much.β€οΈ
Welcome!π«
Thanks for visiting me today. I’ve come to browse; like what I see. Will mark a follow if I can find button. π Love your poems.
Thank you so much, Oneta. Truly appreciate it.β€οΈ
I didn’t find a follow button. Best to you.
Sorry to hear that. We can still visit. Best to you too.β€οΈ
Powerful words, keep moving, I love it, thanks for sharing
Thank you so much for your kind feedback, my friend.β€οΈ
Words to sacrifice, gives courage for new things, some of us left our old self hanging upon a rope, under a tree, I love those words and how your structure them.
Your words always amaze and inspire me. Thank you for that.ππ
Thanks
Wonderful piece, full of wisdomβ€
Thank you so much.πβ€οΈ