Loyal nightingale
sings his song of light,
serenading tales,
to pilot her flight.
She feels his rhythm
synch to her heartbeat,
savory serum,
makes her trip complete.
Sweet lingering tones,
always guide her home,
never feels alone,
hug her as she roams.
One darkened evening,
as nerves shook and swayed,
hoarse voice was leaving,
deepest fears displayed.
Afraid she could never
fly a path so dim?
She let feelings drive her,
straight back home to him.
Rewinding his thoughts,
reviewing her face,
a true lesson taught,
one filled with pure grace.
Quickly embracing
then snuggling tight,
slowly exchanging
stories from that night.
“My ears could not hear,
my soul felt you near,
your song disappeared,
my path became clear,
I charged in full gear,
used love as a steer,
removed every fear,
instantly appeared.”
Happily relieved,
his full voice regained,
pure vibrations weaved,
true love song retained.
– Grace Y. Estevez – Reddy
Originally Published on September 21, 2021 repurposed for
Moonwashed Weekly Challenge May 07, 2024
Prompt – Savory


Beautiful poetry. Great take on the prompt. I love, love the lyrical feel from the first verse and throughout.
Thank you so much, Suzette. So happy you liked it. Have a wonderful day.!💕💕💕
Beautiful!
Thanks so much💕
I especially like the speech and the resolution it portrays. The poem (in its entirety) would fit a hundred years ago and more–meaning it has a classic sense–as it fits now.
So glad you enjoyed it. Thank you so much. Truly appreciated, my friend .💕
Absolutely stunning Grace 💕
Thank you so very much, Maggie. Glad you enjoyed it, my friend .💕
Truly my pleasure Grace ❣️🌹
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A sweet poem/ story Grace. Love conquers all.
Thanks so much, Sadje. Absolutely 💕
You’re always welcome 🙏🏼
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You’re most welcome 🙏🏼
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I love this.
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A gorgeous love song, Grace! 🩶
Thanks so much, Nancy.💕
wonderful as always, Grace…🙏🤍
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my pleasure 🌷🤍
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So beautiful.
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You’re welcome.
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What a beautiful entry, setting the tone for a phenomenal, poem. I love it Grace❣️
Thank you so much, Cindy. Glad you enjoyed, my friend.💕
Awwww, this is such a sweet composition for this prompt Grace! Beautiful. 🥰💖😘
Thank you so much, Kym. Truly appreciated.💕
My pleasure Grace and you are so very welcome my friend. 😘💖😍
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Simply beautiful, Grace! 💞
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You’re welcome. ❣️
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Very sweet. *love*
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The title is perfect for your poetic story, Grace. Your poem is beautifully lyrical with lovely rhyme and flow. ❤️
A beautiful poetic story, Grace! Rhyming is perfect. Love it. 💖💕
Thanks so much, my friend .💕
Always my pleasure 💖
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So inspiring and beautiful Grace.
I love this poem a lot!
Thanks
Thank you so much, Marie. Truly appreciated.💕
This such a sweet poem!
Thanks so much, my friend. Have a wonderful day.💕
You’re welcome!
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Enjoyed reading this well written blogs as all of them are. Have a great night.
Thanks a bunch, Tangie. Have a great one.💕
Simply beautiful, Grace.
Thanks so much, Indira 💕
My pleasure, Grace. 💕💕
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Harrowing flight…and beautiful, loving connection. Sweet, heart-touching poem, Grace! 💞💞💞
Thanks so much, Dawn. Glad you enjoyed, my friend 💕
Great poetry🎸🎸
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Bravo Grace. If only humans could emulate the caring and sharing attitudes expressed in your poem. Thank you for sharing.
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Beautifully written poem, Grace!
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Beautiful thoughts!
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My pleasure!❤
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Beautiful cinquain. Lovely <3