Wrapped in sorrows,
few words spoken.
Saddened stale years
served as tokens.
Sweetest gestures,
strung love along.
Flung wicked words
forever strong.
Listened to lies,
new ones each day.
Danced in spotlights
as anguish played.
Spewed blank phrases
no conviction.
Blown air kisses,
contradictions.
Captured tears bring
self-affliction.
Apologies,
formed addictions.
Standing prepared,
fully withdrawn.
Making this time,
the final straw.
Feeling ready
to let this go.
Slowly sculpting,
a grand plateau.
Glimmering eyes,
smiling so bright.
Inner hues shine,
new found delight.
– Grace Y. Estevez – Reddy
Wow, my post today has the same title as yours! 😊 Such a wonderful coincidence! Yours is beautiful as always. Love it!❤
That’s so cool. Happy you liked it, Aaysid.💕
My pleasure. 😊❤
I was wondering if that the post titles were planned or a coincidence. That is kind of amazing.
It is pretty amazing. I write my posts around two months before I publish them, so it is kind of funny that it was out on the same day.❤️
That makes it even more amazing. I am super impressed with you organization and planning to be two months ahead with your post.
Thanks. I do it this way so that I don’t feel pressure to write.❤️
It is pretty amazing indeed.😊
“Apologies formed addictions” what a Lazer beam of a light bulb brilliant idea that serves as the poem’s upper plateau that seems to be ascending.
What a beautiful compliment. Thanks so very much.💕
A very great emotional poem
So full of good emotions and feelings!
Thanks so much.❤️
Inner hues shine
Beautiful line, so profound and inspiring 💕
Happy you liked it. Thanks so much.❤️
I am always so pleased to read you each day, Grace. This here is magnificent, “Captured tears bring
self-affliction.
Apologies,
formed addictions.” The whole poem is beautiful, and the lines cited resonate most deeply with me. Lovely. ❤️
That’s so nice to hear, my friend. Thank you so very much.❤️❤️❤️
You’re always welcome, Grace. Is such a pleasure. ❤️🥰
❤️ ❤️ ❤️
Its emotional and nostalgic…really liked the poem
Happy to hear that. Thanks so much.❤️
You are welcome✨
❤️
heartfelt❤
💕❤️💕
Wow, this was really beautiful, Grace! I really loved the third and fourth stanza. Something about your poems that always amazes me is your ability of transition, the way you make the readers feel all the positive vibes while ending these is really amazing. I heard this somewhere, that the ending lasts with the reader a lot more than the beginning, and you’re making it a lot more worthy with such beautiful thoughts ❤
I never heard that about the ending staying longer with the reader, but it does make sense. Thanks for sharing this wonderful concept with me and thanks so much for your kind words of support.I truly appreciate it, AB.💕
You’re welcome ❤
Wow! Words can’t express how good this is. Loved it as always!!❤
This is so nice to hear. Thanks so much.💕
Amazingly mesmerising poem so very meaningful….especially thes lines :
‘Spewed blank phrases
no conviction.
Blown air kisses,
contradictions.
Captured tears bring
self-affliction.
Apologies,
formed addictions.’ Keep it up grace !
Thanks so much for your kind words of support, Dhirendra. I truly appreciate it.💕🙏💕
Pl read Grace in place of grace! Sad typing mistake from me!😯
No worries.💕🙏💕
Art in motion 🔥. Trail blazing as always Grace. You really captured that rhythm and flow here 😌
Keep writing! ✨
Thanks so much, O.D. I truly appreciate your support.💕
Welcome! 😁
What a transition from loss to gain! So beautifully written, as always. Great work, Grace👍💐💖
Thank you so much for your kind support, KK. I truly appreciate it.💕
It’s my sweet pleasure 😊
Beautiful Grace.. through the tears you always transition us to the light .. thank you! 💖💖
As with life, my friend. There’s always a rainbow. Thanks so much.💕
Sooo true Grace! You’re so welcome! 💕
Heartfelt poem…so beautifully expressed…the depth & the rythm…it’s so captivating, Grace 🖤✨🤍💫❤️
Thanks so much, Navin. I truly appreciate your kind support 💕
It’s my pleasure, Grace 🤍✨
Wow, this is so beautiful… truelly amazing it brings a certain feeling 🌈
That’s so nice to hear. Thanks so much.💕