Water your palate,
open your closed eyes,
follow the rabbit
towards a surprise.
All things you believed
were simply contrived,
innocence deceived,
interest survived.
Pursue a true path,
answers you will find,
diffuse stubborn wrath
to open your mind.
The life you conceive,
you form and perceive,
all goals you achieve
you choose to receive.
The bad times you live
are steered by pure guilt,
the more love you give
the greater life tilts.
Try to live each day
without fear or hate,
behaviors displayed
create your own fate.
– Grace Y. Estevez- Reddy
I agree every bit of it .🙂🌼❤️
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I’m with Gayatri, totally agree! Love these lines:
The bad times you live
are steered by pure guilt,
the more love you give
the greater life tilts.
Beautiful 🤩
So nice to hear. Thanks so Much, Eleanor.💕
What a stunning piece, my dear Grace!!! You beautifully weaved so many powerful life lessons here, I deeply resonate with every line! Amazingly well done, my friend 🖤🤗
Thank you so much, my dear friend. I truly appreciate your kindness.💕
another beautiful poem, dear friend✨💎
Thank you so much, Coco.💕
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Supereb lines
Thanks so much.❤️
My pleasure…U r welcome
Is beautifully written, with a powerful message, dear Grace. Love it. ❤️❤️
Happy you loved it, my friend. Thank you.❤️
I did, indeed. You’re welcome, Grace. Always. ❤️
Another excellence dear Grace. Well penned beautiful piece ❤
Thanks so much, dear Suma.💕
My pleasure 😊
A stunning piece, Grace! It’s really beautifully written, with a powerful message. Loved this ❤
Glad you liked it, AB. Thank you so much.💕
You’re most welcome 🙂
Beautiful message, Grace
Thanks so much, Shweta.💕🙏💕
You’re welcome 😀
I fully resonate with every line, and particularly ..the more love you give, the greater life tilts… Excellent verses👌💖
I’m so happy to hear that, KK. Thank you.❤️
My pleasure, my friend 😊
A single poem but I see different messages in each
stanza I see. Beautiful as always Grace ❤️ You are such a talent!
That’s so nice to hear, my friend. Thanks so much.I truly appreciate you.💕
Great cadence
Thanks so much.💕
Very meaningful words,Grace dear!These lines appealed to me the most although every bit is good:
Try to live each day
without fear or hate,
behaviors displayed
create your own fate.
keep up the good work, you will love your fate!
So happy you liked liked it, Dhirendra. Thank you so much.💕🙏💕
Thanks Grace for creating such beautiful & inspiring poetry!I too feel inspired to come out with the little poet I have within me in these times of Corona when traveling still hasn’t begun!Credit will go to you if I make it!
That is so nice to hear, Dhirendra. Just know you WILL make it. ❤️
Thanks for encouraging me to utilise the time in conceiving beautiful creations through artistic disposition of words💕
❤️❤️❤️
Inspired by your meaningful poems, I have written my first poem-Living a graceful life !Pl comment for encouragement if you find it worthwhile!
That’s so wonderful.I am so excited to read it. Thanks so much.💕
Thanks for the lovely response! You know I got inspired by your graceful poems! Thanks again for supporting, Grace 🌷🙏🏾
Always a pleasure, dear Dhirendra.💕