Flying my kite,
as I search for lost hope.
Hope flies too high,
tug its transparent rope.
Rope made of thorns,
that cuts straight at my hands.
Hands feel so scorned,
as my knowledge expands.
Expands power,
I kept hidden inside.
Inside the tower,
where my energies hide.
Hide the ego,
I refuse to accept.
Accept, light flows,
while dismissing the rest.
The rest fills needs,
in this balancing act.
Acts without greed,
ensures love will attract.
Attract new paths,
opening many roads.
Roads to success,
destinations unfold.
– Grace Y. Estevez-Reddy
Wow Grace, this is so beautiful!!! I especially love that first stanza, itโs remarkable!!! The way you always intertwine rhyming with divine love and incredible writing is truly inspiring!!! Thank you for sharing your gift with us all!!! This piece is another super GRACEful wonder!! โบ๏ธ๐ค๐ค
You are so awesome Ace! Thank you! Thank you so much for your priceless motivation and support.You have been such a beautiful part of my WP experience. I truly appreciate you my friend.โค๏ธ
Awww Grace, youโve been such a beautiful part of my WP journey!! Itโs always an honor and a pleasure to read your work. Grateful for you too, my dear friend ๐ค๐ค
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I love how each stanza feeds into the next. Nicely done.
Thanks so much, Tammy. So happy you liked it.๐
Lovely poem!
Thank you so much.๐
Beautifully written, Grace. I love how you have beautifully created a flow from beginning till end. โค๏ธ
Thank you so much Shweta!๐โค๏ธ
You’re most welcome, Grace ๐
Wonderful Grace. Beautifully written!
Thank you so much, Vignesh.So happy you liked it.๐
Pleasure is mine ๐
Wow! Great one, Grace!! What a smooth flow, connecting every stanza with the succeeding one!!!๐
So glad to hear you enjoyed it, KK. Thank you so much.๐๐๐
It’s my pleasure ๐
This is so beautifully written. Keep soarin high dear!๐ฅบ
Thank you so very much.โค๏ธ
Ah, what a lovely, lovely poem, dear Grace. I love these lines,
The rest fills needs,
in this balancing act.
Acts without greed,
ensures love will attract.
Beautiful! Love it. โค๏ธโค๏ธ
So happy you enjoyed it, Jeff. Thanks so very much dear friend.โค๏ธ
I did, very much. Welcome, Grace. Always. Have a lovely rest of your week! โค๏ธ
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woe great one. I loved each stanza…Thanks for sharing…:)
So happy you liked it. Thanks so much.โค๏ธ
Wowwww..! Amazing grace..! You are an angel..! Very beautifully penned..! I love it very much.! Keep shinning..! Wonderful post.. ๐โบ๏ธ
Thanks so very much dear Filarance, I truly appreciate your kind words my friend.๐๐๐
Absolutely my pleasure..! You are very welcome my friend..!โบ๏ธ
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Very beautiful and graceful piece๐ป๐คโค๏ธ
Thank you so much, Diana.๐๐๐
Beautiful… Each stanza is so well penned…. Liked it a lot…
Happy to hear you liked it. Thank you.๐
Lovely as always Geace, awesome n I loved these lines :Inside the tower,
where my energies hide โค
So happy you liked it, Suma.Thank you so much.I appreciate you dear friend.๐
It’s the hope for me, that flies too high, I feel like you are the transparent rope that reach to me. Amazing ๐
So sweet of you.Thanks, my friend.๐
Am glad