Inner Whispers

Hums words with pictures,
set deep in her mind,
colors turn intense,
as she paints her rhymes.

Rhymes open deep zones,
that flow by non-stop,
they carry mixed tones,
quite smooth yet so sharp.

Sharp shadows that dance,
inside of her head,
link lyrics with tunes,
sewn tight with clear thread.

Thread made of blocked dreams,
that somehow feel real,
profound messages,
made of tarnished steel.

Steel polished stainless,
reflect pretty views,
finished so shiny,
yet still far from new.

New adventures loom,
with no start or end,
instantly expands,
to somehow extend.

Extends ever far,
blasts past time and space,
intricate designs,
with touches of grace.

Graceful tough lessons,
appear in great sums,
to sketch all portraits,
her silent words hum.

– Grace Y. Estevez – Reddy

Originally Published January 13, 2023

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  1. It’s an insightful poem with a lovely format, linking one stanza with another through the same word. Wonderful, Grace 👌💐💖

  2. Grace <3 … I didn't get the chance to tell you … first the image stopped me with inquisitiveness, like many posts you voice through imagery so true do … but then you pulled translucent and iridescent thread with your words and wove a tapestry of beautiful emotions that draped over me like the best shawl ever could! Thank you!

  3. A beautiful picture painted and song sung through your words, Grace! 💞💞💞 I love the way the last and first words wrap, carrying you through the verses and back to the beginning 💞

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