Am I alive?
I feel my breath,
see it arise
off of my chest,
I have no voice,
ran out of strength,
no free will choice,
or proven depth.
Am I alive?
Not really sure,
each passing day
survives a chore.
My value gone
with my old face,
long for beyond
standing in place.
Am I alive?
or, did I die?
Cover my eyes,
help scared tears hide.
Swallow my pride,
hopes become sighs.
Smiling outside
feeling deprived.
Am I alive?
Pray for the best,
faith on my side,
passing all tests,
healing inside,
in peace I rest,
let go and fly,
my soul is blessed.
Am I alive?
In a new world?
Spirit arrives,
gives it a whirl.
Passions derive
as joys uncurl.
The urge to strive,
slowly unfurls.
Am I alive?
My pulse still beats,
warm inner light,
from crown to feet.
Glowing so bright
at last complete.
Holding insight
while still discreet.
– Grace Y. Estevez – Reddy
This is so beautiful my friend!
I am so glad you liked it. Thank you so much, my friend.💕
This is just lovely, Grace! Love how you have concluded it!❤💕
Happy to hear that ,Aaysid. Thanks so very much.💕
You are very welcome, Grace. ❤
Wondrous verses, Grace. This here is my fav, “Passions derive
as joys uncurl.
The urge to strive,
slowly unfurls.” Magic. ❤️❤️
Thanks, my friend. Thanks so much. Glad you liked it.💕
You’re welcome, Grace. My complete pleasure. ❤️❤️
Oh my eyes…they truly shine…when I read your lines…they’re clearly divine…the way you rhyme…I simply smile…Grace, you’re the light…from earth to sky ✨❤️💫❤️🌟
This means so much to me, Navin. Thanks so very much, my friend.💕🙏💕
You’re very welcome, my friend ✨❤️💫
This line is so true
passing all tests,
healing inside,
in peace I rest,
let go and fly,
my soul is blessed.
How simply you simplified complexity
Thank you, Reena. So glad you enjoyed.💕
A beautifully written piece. Enjoyed reading this❤
Glad you liked it. Thanks so much.💕
Am I alive? So beautiful! I liked
Swallow my pride,
hopes become sighs.
And the last stanza was ultimate. A very beautifully crafted piece, Grace 👍💖💐
I’m so glad you enjoyed. Thanks so very much,KK.💕❤️💕
You’re more than welcome 😊💖
This question plays the most when the feet are not working. It’s a challenge to find out. 💞❤️♥️
Absolutely. Thanks so much.💕
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