Crack open the door
so eyes can explore
a little bit more
of existence core.
A peek into life
so hard to describe,
a perfect divine,
intricate design.
An abyss that’s not there,
yet flows through the air,
a mystical flare
always ever rare.
Swift trickling bright sparks
that glow in the dark,
creating a mark,
priceless work of art.
Shift views to exhale,
spirits taking sail,
no soul falls or fails,
pure peace is inhaled.
Clear thoughts can then form
what life will perform,
easing every storm,
so nature feels warm.
– Grace Y. Estevez – Reddy
This poem is really lovely, Grace!
Thank you!
Joanna
I am so glad you like it, Joanna. Thank you so much.💕❤️💕
Amazing
Thanks so much.💕
I love how you are able to capture moments of impact. Each moment we experience has meaning. You highlight positivity in those moments through your poetry and you remind me that simplicity does it….. Just live in the moment.
This truly warms my heart. Thank you so very much, Candice, your kind words truly mean a lot to me.💕
This is so great! Felt this 💗
So happy to hear you felt it. Thanks so very much.💕
The first stanza is so simple, yet profound. It describes perfectly what we should all strive for in life: just take a peek around and see what’s there. We’ll never discover anything if we don’t open our eyes a little bit and look. Lots of wisdom in this one, Grace, as always. Wonderful piece of writing. 🙂
Thanks so very much, Mike. Your kind words truly mean a lot to me. I appreciate it.💕
Wow Grace your gift in composure and rhyming with an incredible message always leave me speechless. Bravo!💖
That’s so nice of you to say, my dear friend. Thank you so much. I truly appreciate you.💕
Wow. I love this entire poem, and especially love the beginning…it’s those cracks that allow the light in and out. Just gorgeous, dear Grace. ❤️🥰
So glad you enjoyed, my friend. Yes, the cracks allow the light.Thanks so much.💕🙏💕
You’re most welcome, Grace. Always. 🙏💖
An uplifting poem, Grace. Liked the last but one stanza most. Lovely thoughts 😊💖
Thanks so much, dear KK.💕
Always welcome, Grace 💖
Lovely Grace. The third stanza is so good 🙂
Thanks so much, Vignesh. Glad you liked it.💕
The rhythm , the rhyme ,
Do they listen to you
The flawless flow
Seems to flow with you,
The positivity
Thanks so much, Reena.💕❤️💕
Your words are beautiful and thank you for liking my posts. It’s noted and you’re appreciated <3
Thank you , Donna. I truly enjoy your interesting posts, they always offer such great ideas. My pleasure.💕
Beautiful 🌷poem, Grace ♥️
Thanks. So much.💕
My pleasure 🙏