Icicles freeze saddened thoughts,
underneath the crimson moon.
Grasp cold strength from lessons taught,
regrets form inner monsoons.
Reflections caress chapped skin,
absorbed by the cherry moon.
Guilty hearts extract old sins,
memories return too soon.
Old dreams dance within the breeze,
held within the bloody moon.
Whispered lyrics narrate scenes,
painted with a heartfelt tune.
Fallen tears melt away scars,
embraced by the rosy moon.
Close both eyes, wish on a star,
dreams fly with a red balloon.
– Grace Y. Estevez – Reddy
Written for Melissa Lemay’s Fandango’s Flash Fiction Challenge #239


Beautiful ❤️
Thank you so much 💕
“Guilty hearts extract old sins,
memories return too soon.”
Chills! Love the contrast of all the “icy” references against the warm colors of the moon.
So happy you enjoyed it. Thank you so very much.💕
Nice
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Welcome 🌹
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Oh so well written
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You’re most welcome
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Beautiful image
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Grace your writing is flawless.
This is such a beautiful take ❤️🌹❤️
Thank you so very much. Delighted to know you enjoyed, my friend.💕
Always Grace 🤗
My pleasure 💖
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Absolutely beautiful poetry Grace, I love all the lines.
You knocked this one out of the park! Fabulous piece!!
I’m so happy you enjoyed it, dear Suzette. Thank you so much. This truly made my day.💕
You are very welcome Grace!
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always beautifully expressed 🙏🤍
Thank you so much.💕
my pleasure 🤍🙏
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I like the repetition of the moon and the hopeful ending.❤️🙏🏻
Happy you enjoyed. Thank you.💕
That last line and all of your words so piercing and relatable. amazing Grace… 🤗
Thanks a bunch, my friend 💕
It’s a pleasure Grace!!
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well written and good ending too
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Beautifull…✨️
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🩵🎈 Really nice feeling to this poem. 🩵
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regrets form inner monsoons…well said, Grace!ove this beautiful poem 😊💖
Thanks so much, my friend.💕
Truly my pleasure 💖
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Wonderful!!!
Thank you 💕
You’re welcome!
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Absolutely beautiful
Thanks so much 💕
This is fabulous 💗
Thanks so much 💕
Fantastic imagery, Grace! Beautifully written 💞💞💞
Thank you so much, Dawn.💕🙏💕