Forever Love

A precious dove fell deep in love,
with a fierce hawk flying above.
One day they met, a friendship set,
their heartbeats formed a great duet.

The pretty dove often felt plain,
uninteresting, and so mundane,
Until the hawk erased all lines,
gave her his heart for Valentines .

They spent this day under sun rays,
laughed as they played til skies turned grey.
Decided to follow their hearts,
then vowed to never be apart.

Some differences soon came to light,
the dove felt dull, no longer bright.
Her flight not high, lacked sharp hawk eyes,
inside her worth had slowly died.

Loud silence made him feel uptight,
hawk knew that something was not right.
He went for flights, promptly each night,
searching for ways to make dove bright.

A new idea soon came to him,
to find out why his dove turned dim.
Exposed his soul so she could see,
how his fondness will always be.

She soon explained what she believed,
he smiled at her feeling relieved.
“Our differences excite our days,
enhance in many distinct ways.”

The couple soon went back to peace,
as everyday their love increased.
Though not the same, they were twin flames,
eternal love they both proclaimed.

– Grace Y. Estevez – Reddy

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  1. The poem is a work of beauty, encapsulating the essence of love and the might of acceptance. The simile of an exquisite dove, falling in love with a fierce hawk is a remarkable and gripping narrative, and the manner in which their camaraderie matures into a great duet is incredibly moving. The descriptions used to illustrate their love are lively and poignant, and the hawk’s unwavering devotion and consideration towards the dove are profoundly touching and uplifting. The poem affirms the verity that genuine love surmounts all disparities and stimulates our finest qualities. In its entirety, the poem is a joy to read, and it serves as a testament to the potency of love. πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ŒπŸ˜Š

      1. @GraceoftheSun You’re very welcome! I’m glad that my response resonated with you, and it’s wonderful to hear that you appreciate it. Your piece was thought-provoking and well-written, and I enjoyed engaging with it. Keep up the great work! πŸ‘πŸ˜Š

  2. Wow Grace, this is a masterpiece. A current favorite of yours for me 😊. The journey you so beautifully yet so effortlessly describe is truly a delight to read. Well done, my friend πŸ€πŸ€—

  3. So sad how comparisons can steal your light and joy. So glad her love helped her find it again and LOVE the thought of the twin flames πŸ’žπŸ’žπŸ’ž

  4. This is so moving. And in the aspect of twin flames and soul connections… it speaks volumes. I haven’t been blogging long, but I have been increasingly moved by your works that I come across. Thank you. ✨

  5. This is such a beautiful poem! It captures the eternal power of love so perfectly. It’s a reminder to cherish and nurture our relationships, and to never take them for granted.

  6. This is such a beautiful poem! It captures the eternal power of love so perfectly. It’s a reminder to cherish and nurture our relationships, and to never take them for granted.

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