A precious dove fell deep in love,
with a fierce hawk flying above.
One day they met, a friendship set,
their heartbeats formed a great duet.
The pretty dove often felt plain,
uninteresting, and so mundane,
Until the hawk erased all lines,
gave her his heart for Valentines .
They spent this day under sun rays,
laughed as they played til skies turned grey.
Decided to follow their hearts,
then vowed to never be apart.
Some differences soon came to light,
the dove felt dull, no longer bright.
Her flight not high, lacked sharp hawk eyes,
inside her worth had slowly died.
Loud silence made him feel uptight,
hawk knew that something was not right.
He went for flights, promptly each night,
searching for ways to make dove bright.
A new idea soon came to him,
to find out why his dove turned dim.
Exposed his soul so she could see,
how his fondness will always be.
She soon explained what she believed,
he smiled at her feeling relieved.
“Our differences excite our days,
enhance in many distinct ways.”
The couple soon went back to peace,
as everyday their love increased.
Though not the same, they were twin flames,
eternal love they both proclaimed.
– Grace Y. Estevez – Reddy
Beautiful! The poem is lovely, too!
Such a lovely poem!
Thanks so much.💕
Thank you so much, AC. Happy you liked it.💕
Awesome!
Thanks so much 💕
So beautiful! Thank you for writing it.
Glad you enjoyed. Thank you💕
Wow, beautiful Grace
Thanks so much, Chris.💕
You’re welcome
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I love your poetic love story! Lots of wisdom to learn from it!
Happy to hear that, Dwight. Thank you.💕
You are welcome!
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Clever poem Grace, beautifully written! 👌👌❤️❤️👏👏
So glad you liked it. Thanks so much 💕🙏💕
A lovely verse for Valentines – just perfect 🙂
Thank you so much, Angela.💕
The poem is a work of beauty, encapsulating the essence of love and the might of acceptance. The simile of an exquisite dove, falling in love with a fierce hawk is a remarkable and gripping narrative, and the manner in which their camaraderie matures into a great duet is incredibly moving. The descriptions used to illustrate their love are lively and poignant, and the hawk’s unwavering devotion and consideration towards the dove are profoundly touching and uplifting. The poem affirms the verity that genuine love surmounts all disparities and stimulates our finest qualities. In its entirety, the poem is a joy to read, and it serves as a testament to the potency of love. 👍👏👌😊
Thank you so much. I am thrilled to know that you enjoyed this piece, and truly appreciate your thoughtful response. So nice to hear.💕
@GraceoftheSun You’re very welcome! I’m glad that my response resonated with you, and it’s wonderful to hear that you appreciate it. Your piece was thought-provoking and well-written, and I enjoyed engaging with it. Keep up the great work! 👍😊
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Wow Grace, this is a masterpiece. A current favorite of yours for me 😊. The journey you so beautifully yet so effortlessly describe is truly a delight to read. Well done, my friend 🤍🤗
Happy you enjoyed it, my friend. Thanks a lot. Truly means so much to me.💕
This is a beautiful poem Grace. Love overcomes all differences if there’s a will.
Thank you so much, Sadje. Absolutely 💕
A beautiful Valentine poem!
Thank you so much 💕
A lovely poetic love story, so appropriate for Valentine’s Day. Enjoyed it 😊💖
Happy to hear that, KK. Thanks so much.💕
So welcome, my friend 💖
Oh I love your the story and message in your poem. If only more could be like birds. Delightful Grace! 💞
Thank you so much, dear, Cindy. Happy you enjoyed it, my friend 💕
You’re so welcome Dear Grace. It’s a pleasure!!! 💗
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So sad how comparisons can steal your light and joy. So glad her love helped her find it again and LOVE the thought of the twin flames 💞💞💞
Happy you enjoyed it, Dawn. Thanks so much. Truly appreciate you.💕
You are most welcome Grace, and thank YOU! Appreciation is mutual 💞💞💞
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This is beautiful Grace!
Thanks so much , Belladonna 💕
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A beautiful Valentine poem! Lots of wisdom to learn from it!
Thank you so much. Glad you liked it.💕
Beautiful love story, you share with us friend Grace.
I loved it very much.
Hugs.
Happy you enjoyed it, my friend . Thank you.💕
This is so moving. And in the aspect of twin flames and soul connections… it speaks volumes. I haven’t been blogging long, but I have been increasingly moved by your works that I come across. Thank you. ✨
So nice to hear. Thank you so much. 💕🙏💕
Totally smile-inducing and expertly crafted. From first line to last, this one captured my heart. Such a cool poem, Grace! 🙂
Happy you enjoyed it, my friend. Thanks so much, Mike.💕
I love this ☺️☺️🤍🕊️🦅
Thanks so much 💕
This is such a beautiful poem! It captures the eternal power of love so perfectly. It’s a reminder to cherish and nurture our relationships, and to never take them for granted.
Thanks so much. Happy you enjoyed it.💕
Wonderful!!
Thank you so much 💕
This is such a beautiful poem! It captures the eternal power of love so perfectly. It’s a reminder to cherish and nurture our relationships, and to never take them for granted.
Thank you so much. Absolutely.💕😊💕