Loud words
all died,
dreams stirred
inside,
unheard,
denied,
withered,
sun dried.
Always
reshaped,
each day
escaped,
doorways
were draped,
dark gray
clouds caped.
Silence
screams songs,
guidance
cures wrongs,
sixth sense
belongs,
intense
and strong.
Light drops
fell down,
to stop
her frown,
flip flop
around,
love hops,
bliss found.
Great tales
came back,
details
all stack,
no fails
or cracks,
prevails,
on track.
Self blame
was bound,
tough shame
then bowed,
words came
in loud,
bright flame
danced proud.
– Grace Y. Estevez – Reddy
I like the punch (so to speak) of this poem.
Happy to hear that. Thank you 💕
Excellent poetry Grace! The words so well balanced reads courage and strength triumphs in the end if one trusts one’s “sixth sense’ to “dance proud” and soar.
Happy you enjoyed it, Suzette. Thank you so very much, my friend.💕
You are very welcome Grace! Cheers.
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nice flow of words in this poem
Thank you so much 💕
Great rhythm in this piece Grace 💕
Happy you enjoyed it, Angela. Thank you so much 💕
fantastic, Grace! <3
Thanks so much, David 💕
a stunning flow, Grace🤍👌
Thank you so much, dear Destiny.💕
always a pleasure 🙏🤍
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Very moving poem
Glad you liked it, Sadje. Thank you 💕
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Powerful and moving words, especially in the ‘silence’ stanza. Beautifully done! 💞💞💞
Happy you enjoyed it, Dawn. Thanks a bunch 💕
Love this Grace! Beautiful as always.
Thanks so much, Belladonna. Happy you enjoyed it.💕
You’re welcome!
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Lovely composition.
Thank you so much 💕
You never fail to amaze me with your poetry, this is so beautiful!! ✨️💕
So sweet of you. Thank you so much.💕
I like how this poem flows.
Thank you so much 💕
Love the flow and rhythm of this piece Grace! 🌊👌❤️👏 Very sharp & concise! 😁
Thank you so much, my friend. Happy you enjoyed it.💕
One or two word verses are impactful in conveying the message. Well penned, Grace 👍💖
Thank you so much, dear KK💕
You’re welcome 💖
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I loved it
Thanks so much 💕
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A pleasure to enjoy your beautiful poetic sentiment, friend Grace.
Best regards.
So happy you enjoyed it, Lincoln. Thank you so much.💕
i love the 2 syllable per line form. is that something you created?
Happy you enjoyed it, Art. I’m not sure if I created it or not, I just went with the flow. Thank you so much.💕
it was very interesting.
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