As the world spins
does it shed sins?
Making wrongs right
all day and night?
Are problems solved
quickly absolved?
Do winds bring hope?
enough to cope?
Do all our fears,
and guilty tears,
grab hold and steer,
as gloom appears?
Do we throw hooks,
behave like rooks,
in little nooks,
exchanging looks?
Did we invent
outer intent?
A force to blame
for inner shame?
If we decide
to look inside,
what will we find
along with pride?
A tiny light,
twinkles at sight,
a brilliant force,
connecting source.
A silent bell
we know too well,
guides and compels,
within our cells.
– Grace Y. Estevez -Reddy

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Wow this was brilliantππΌβ€οΈ
Happy you liked it.Thanks so much, dear Gayatri.πππ
Omg Grace, this is simply breathtaking. What a stunning piece, has to be one of my favorites! I especially love that last stanza, the rhyming is exquisite and the love throughout is deeply magical. Perfectly done π€π€
I am so happy you liked it, my friend. Thank you so much.I truly appreciate you.Much love to you.πππ
Beauty, elegance, and truth on a page and in the world. I love this piece, dear Grace. β€β€
Thatβs so very nice to hear. Thank you so much, Jeff. I truly appreciate your kind feedback, my friend.πππ
rooks in nooks..was that chess parallel? If it was that was an awesome analogy..awesome anyway though ππ
Yes. Glad you liked it. Thanks .πππ
this is such a wonderful piece so beautifully delivered with truth Graceπ
It makes me so happy to hear that you liked it, Cindy. Thank you.β€οΈ
While you write, will your brain roam around the globe to grab the universal knowledge of truths?? It’s just wow dear Grace π€β€
Thatβs so sweet of you to say, dear Suma. Thank you so much. I truly appreciate you, my friend.πππ
Always a pleasure my dear β€
this poem is beyond the words… is deep… is great
is felt deep in the bones…
some will never dare to look inside of themselves
thanks, grace for sharing this beautyπβ¨ππ―
I am thrilled that you liked it, dear Coco. Thanks so much, my friend.πππ
thank you, Grace, as alwaysπ―ππ
Beautifully written, Grace
Thanks so much, Shweta.β€οΈ
You’re welcome π
good questions.
Thanks so much.β€οΈ
Beautiful, breathtaking, mesmerizing… just wow, Grace!! Love the way you have put forth the questions, it really makes one think! Stay blessed and have a beautiful dayπ₯°π€πππΉ
Im so delighted to hear you liked it. Thank you so very much, my friend. I truly appreciate it.π
Wonderfully powerful poem! π€ Felt the forces of nature and the world in your beautiful lines…
So happy you liked it, Samsahana. Thanks so very much.πππ
A thought provoking piece! The smooth flow makes one to read it in one go. Brilliantly written piece, Graceππππ
Glad you liked it, KK. Thank you so much, my friend.π
My pleasure π
Beautiful Grace.
A tiny light,
twinkles at sight,
a brilliant force,
connecting source. – This is so enchanting!
Thatβs so nice to hear, Vignesh. Thank you, my friend.π
You’re welcome π
ππAmazing poemπππ
Thanks so much.πππ
Excellent write dear grace..!π€π
Happy you liked it my friend. Thanks so much, dear Filarance.π
You’re very welcome dear grace
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“Sun always give us light of hope”.
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Ok sir. Thanks for reply.
Always a pleasure but I am not a Sir, I am a lady. Much love to you.β€οΈ
Sorry Mam pardon me.
No worries at all. Just clarifying for future refrence, my friend.β€οΈ