It takes will to pass each day,
detect truths from all the fake.
Allow guides to lead the way,
decide which view one should take.
So much more to feel concrete,
make the right choice to believe,
many stories hold deceit,
often wrongs provide relief.
Some lies are smooth to swallow,
but cause guilts that feel hollow ,
sad thoughts are hard to follow,
as regrets cloud tomorrows.
What if hearts create techniques?
that detect when answers speak,
unraveling underneath,
to see clearly down beneath.
Everyone wants to feel whole,
deep within each lonely soul,
allowing faith to patrol,
while letting spirit control.
Letting inner conscious guide,
analyze tales in all eyes.
Listen to whispers inside,
feel the hopes that life provides.
– Grace Y. Estevez – Reddy
All of your lines speak volumes to me Grace. I want to believe each lonely soul and give the benefit of the doubt which I mostly do but fine tuning and picking weeds is such a vital thing to dol A great poem! 💖
So true, Cindy. I couldn’t agree more. Thanks so much, my friend .💕
Indeed and you’re most welcome dearest!!
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Wonderful
Thanks so much.💕
Beautiful poem, dear Grace. Ending is superb. 💖
Thanks so much, Jeff.💕
You’re welcome, Grace. Always. 💖
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This was so beautiful to read! Loved it!🌠
So glad you liked it, Jan. Thanks so much.💕
This sounded so beautiful from the very start and you ended it on the same note. Loved it, Grace ❤❤
So glad you enjoyed, AB. Thanks so much.💕
Always a pleasure ❤❤
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Thank you, Grace,for this poem!
Joanna
Thanks so much, Joanna.💕
You are very welcome!
Joanna
Excellent poem with superb ending covering aspects of inner strength… well penned. Liked it.
So happy you liked it. Thanks so much.💕
What if hearts create techniques?
that detect when answers speak,
unraveling underneath,
to see clearly down beneath.
These were so profound!
Loved this poem, Grace!❤❤
So glad you liked it, dear Aayushi. Thanks so much.💕
A beautifully crafted poem, Grace. The last stanza has the great message. Good one 👌💐💖
So happy you liked, KK. Thanks a bunch.💕
It’s my pleasure, Grace 💖
Oh God, how I needed to read this today.
The first line is so raw.
Lovely work, Grace🤗❤
Thanks so very much, dear Suvi.💕
Truly a pleasure 💖
Another beautiful poem! I absolutely love it.
Thanks so much.💕
Wholesome and full of hope!❤
Thanks so much dear Aaysid.💕
“Everyone wants to feel whole,
deep within each lonely soul…”
Such a core human desire… You know how to cut to the quick, Grace. This is beautiful. 🙂
So happy you liked it, Mike. Thank you.💕
A beautiful post thank you so much
So glad you liked it. Thanks so much.💕