Erase your presence from my mind,
your smile, your laugh, frustrated sighs,
the way your glance made me feel high,
worn memories that made me cry.
Erase the promises you made,
such heartfelt words you soon betrayed,
rough arguments with tear cascades,
synchronized breaths we shared embraced.
Erase your lingered scent from me,
along with visions I still see,
remove the days that made us “we”,
so my heartache can find some ease.
Erase your love in every sense,
but true love always finds defense,
protective force is so immense,
it comes back growing more intense.
– Grace Y. Estevez- Reddy
βErase your love in every sense,
but true love always finds defense,
protective force is so immense,
it comes back growing more intense.β – this stanza is golden!! I absolutely love every bit of this piece! The paradox of emotion is absolutely breathtaking! Brilliantly done, my friend π€π€
Thanks so very much, dear Ace.πππ
Heartachingly beautiful, Grace. Magic. β€β€
So happy you liked it, my friend. Thanks so much.π
Truly did. Beautiful. Youβre welcome, Grace, always. β€οΈπ₯°
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Wild emotion in these words! π
Thanks so very much, Donna.π
heartache is so hard and you expressed it sooo well Graceπ
You always make me smile, Cindy. Thanks so much.β€οΈ
Now that makes me grateful. You’re so welcome Grace.ππ
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What a remarkable, poignant piece! Loved every bit of itβ¦ π
Thank you so much, Sam.π
Well written. Wonderful one..!
Thank you so much,I truly appreciate your kind support.π
Love always finds a way if it’s meant to be. Beautifully written, Grace
Happy you liked it, Shweta. Thanks so much.π
You’re most welcome π
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It’s beautiful and acheful. Some memories will never pass over- true love can only grow stronger. Well written.
Glad to hear you liked it, Florence. Thanks so much.π
beautifully written so lyrical I love it
Thanks so much, my friend.Iβm so happy you liked it.π
Words are the true weapons to express our feelings. So powerful piece dear Grace,loved below lines β€
Erase your lingered scent from me,
along with visions I still see,
remove the days that made us βweβ,
so my heartache can find some ease.
Iβm so glad you liked it. Thanks so very much, dear Suma.π
This is such a sad poem Grace. Beautifully written. Last stanza is very nice.
Thanks so much, Vignesh.Glad to hear you liked it.π
Absolutely beautiful, loved it! β€
Thatβs so nice to hear, Simmi. Thank you.π
You’re welcome! π
Heartbreakingly beautiful. It’s very Wonderful written
Thanks so very much, Aanchal.π
So touching, but beautiful verses. The emotion so intensely expressed. A powerful poemπππ
Thanks so much,KK. I’m happy you liked it.β€οΈ
My pleasure, Grace π
Lovely!
Thanks so much.π
The perfect theme song for heartache..
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Very beautiful and poetic dear Grace! Well done β€οΈβ€οΈπππΉ
Happy you liked it, Diana. Thanks so much.π