Raw anger and rage,
blood bubbles then boils.
Red heated flushed face,
emotions recoil.
Headaches vibrate,
tears moisten dry soil.
Take mark center stage,
composure soon broils.
One strong simple phrase
shoots straight to the sun.
Both arms become rays,
hot words a shotgun.
Remember past days,
trigger so minds run.
Peace swims far away,
anxiety stuns.
Angels then embrace,
provide a restart.
Soft kiss to the face,
mends a sorrowed heart.
Veins flow with pure grace,
all tensions depart.
A warm untouched space,
offers a new start.
Clear calmness inside
rocks soul to full ease.
Pure patience provides,
freedom like the breeze.
Clarity soon guides,
provides solid keys.
Watch as fury slides,
so blurred eyes could see.
– Grace Y. Estevez – Reddy
Moonwashed Weekly Challenge #146 – June 6, 2023
Prompt – Untouched

Fantastic movement from the waves of discontent to the “clarity’s… keys” Amazing take on the prompt!
So happy you enjoyed it, my friend. Thanks so much, Suzette. 💕🙏💕
You are always welcome!!
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Great poem!
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Beautiful.
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Love this Grace 💕
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Very powerful Grace ❤️
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Superbly evoked
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Grace, I don’t comment everyday, although I click like daily. I hope you know in your heart what a brilliant writer you are. This poem today was raw and powerful and elegant simultaneously and I loved it. Especially the last stanza.
Awww. So sweet of you, Nicole. Thank you so much, my friend . Truly appreciate you .💕
A beautiful take Grace
Thanks so much, Sadje 💕
You’re most welcome
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WOW, how thought-provoking, raw, and powerful Grace! 🥰💪🏼😍
I’m so glad you enjoyed it, Kym. Thanks a bunch, my friend.💕
You are so very welcome Grace. My pleasure my dear! 🤗☕😊💖🥰
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Beautiful poem
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I felt every emotion! Well written💖
Happy you enjoyed it. Thanks so much 💕
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Woah! That’s quite creative.
Loved it!
Thank you so much, Anjali 💕
So wonderful! Beautifully written 😊💖
Thanks so much, KK 💕
My pleasure 💖
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Beauiful expressions of contrasts in life from the undesirable to a more peaceful existence. Briliant writing, Grace.
Thank you so much, Eugenia. So happy you enjoyed it.💕
My pleasure, Grace! 💖
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love the raw emotions of anger release to calmness on the other side Grace! ❣️
Happy to hear that, Cindy. Thanks so much 💕
You’re very welcome Grace! 💗
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Lovely, Grace! 🙂
Thank you so much 💕
Powerful words well crafted indeed!
Brilliant piece of writing.
Great poetry 💐🙏
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Fantastic poem, Grace.
Thank you so much 💕
Lots of raw power in this piece, Grace! “hot words a shotgun” really stands out….they certainly both can create some damage! Love how you tamed the fire 💞💞💞
So nice to hear, Dawn. Thanks so much.💕
Beautiful piece!
Glad you enjoyed. Thank you.💕