Magnetic strong words,
attached to my mind,
no longer confined.
I turn them around,
but they just repel,
surround and compound,
disarming my shell.
with intentions said,
bounce upon my head.
Replays the lyrics,
that form with each word,
smug ego transferred.
Magnetic sharp tunes,
all come to a halt,
clear off my scarred wounds,
removes grains of salt.
Embraces and shields,
visions cleared and healed,
to regain control.
– Grace Y. Estevez – Reddy
Moonwashed Weekly Challenge – November 08, 2022
Prompt – Directionless
Once again, great flow. Good job.
Thank you so much 💕
I love this
Happy to hear that. Thank you so much.💕
Great take on the prompt, Grace. I appreciate your words for the hope of reconciliation in the final verse.
Thank you so much, Suzette. So nice to hear, my friend.💕🙏💕
My pleasure, Grace😍
Ooooh, nicely crafted, Grace. I love way this piece moves along.
Happy you enjoyed it, my friend. Thank you 💕
I sure did. Happy writing, my friend. ^_^
I love this and it flows beautifully, Grace. Your last stanza is inspirational.
Thanks so much, Eugenia. Happy you enjoyed.💕🙏💕
My pleasure, Grace!
WOW Grace, I love how you composed the ebb and flow of this poem; regaining control after facing distressful experiences. Bravo, my friend. 😍👏🏼🥰
I’m so glad you enjoyed it, Kym. Thank you so very much, my friend.💕
You are so very welcome Grace! Hugs and smooches! 😘💖😍
Thanks so much.💕🙏💕
Such a gorgeous uplifting poem Grace! ❣️
Glad you enjoyed it, my friend. Thank you.💕
The pleasure is all mine Grace!! ❣️
Love the ending lines.
Thank you so much, Sadje 💕
Such a lovely poem, a wakeup from distress. 💕
Thank you so much, Lamittan 💕
Beautiful verses full of hope and inspirations. An uplifting poem, Grace, as always 😊💖
So happy you enjoyed it. Thank you so much.💕
You’re more than welcome 😊
Wonderful flow and beautifully said, Grace! Love the way you end on a high note 💞💞💞
Thanks so much, Dawn. So glad you enjoyed.💕
Superb, absolutely superb!👏🏾♥️
Thanks so much 💕🙏💕