Who built a fortress,
to help find true you?
In a green forest,
removing the blues.
Who captured your falls,
and cushioned them all?
Then helped you stand tall,
made your life a ball.
Who heightens your sense,
provides solid truths?
Clearing your blurred lens,
enhancing your view.
Who never said bye,
and joined every sigh?
Stood firm by your side,
wiping tears you cried.
Who will remain here,
loyal till no end?
Listens through your ears,
Projects, and defends.
Who urges your tries,
hoping you comply?
Uses both your eyes,
so you can rise high.
– Grace Y. Estevez – Reddy
Magnificent, Grace. Deep, powerful, and always wondrously created. I love it. β€οΈ
So happy you liked it, my friend. Thank you so much.πβ€οΈπ
Youβre welcome, Grace. Is always a treat to read you. β€οΈβ€οΈ
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Damn, Grace….you’re on roll….while I drown in deep water of your powerful stream of this beautiful piece…translation…it’s an amazing poem π«
This is so nice to hear, Navin. Thanks so much πβ€οΈπ
You’re very welcome, Grace π«β€οΈβ¨
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Beautiful poem so touching
Heartwarming
Thanks so much.πβ€οΈπ
Heart touching
Thanks so much, N.D.π
Incredible. That was just so beautiful. I LOVED IT very much.β€β€
Thanks so very much.π
Gorgeous poem Grace. β₯οΈ
Thanks so much, my friend.π
There is power in these lines Grace. β€
Thatβs very nice to hear. Thanks so much, Marie.π
Absolutely beautiful! Questions like.. Who will remain here,
loyal till no end..are thought provoking. Well penned, Grace ππ
Glad you liked it.Thanks so much, KK.π
So welcome, Grace π
It is always such a pleasure to read your poems. Keep going!
Thanks so much for your kindness and support.πβ€οΈπ
Always!
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Truly a beautiful poem Grace.
And those that do are the ones for us to stick with !ππΉ
Absolutely, Cindy.π
Your poems are full of inspiration, positivity and hope. Love it Grace and keep up the amazing work β€
Thanks so very much for your kind support. I truly appreciate it .πβ€οΈπ
You’re very welcome Graceπ
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Beautiful β€οΈ
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Wonderful poem Grace ππ€
So glad you liked it. Thanks so much.π