Conceptual

What happens with no one around?
Screams vibrate loud,
without a sound.
Only lingered echoes surround.
Ceiling to ground,
felt so profound.

What happens when nobody is there?
Walk endless stairs,
stuck in a square,
within a box while unaware,
inner repairs,
practice self care.

What does one see with eyes closed shut?
Thoughts interrupt,
to readjust.
Brightness or darkness minds construct.
a vacant rut,
or sense of trust.

What is it like to live in peace?
High hopes increase,
joys are released.
Walking through time fully with ease.
Flow with the breeze,
receive wise keys.

What will tomorrow bring to light?
Deeper insight,
carry delight.
A way to make each day feel right.
To reignite,
sparks that excite.

– Grace Y. Estevez – Reddy

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  1. I’ve been down so long, these are the words I needed to hear! Thank You πŸ™πŸΎ

  2. Your poems are helping me grow and get back to being more fluid with my own. Thai is deep and just full of familiarity. I feel we have been through similar things β€οΈβ€πŸ©Ή

  3. I like how conceptual the picture is in accentuating the message I got from your poem.

    Taking tine to look into our minds, to recharge and meditate. To bring out our inner light and share it with the world as we begin to see everything much clearer.

    No-one sees in the dark after-all ✨

  4. I love reading your words of powerful positivity ,
    Gifted person with immense inner strength ,
    Sotrue to your name, GRACEβ€οΈπŸ’•πŸ’•

  5. I like the philosophical tinge in this poem, Grace. Feelings have been very well expressed. Good one πŸ‘ŒπŸ’πŸ’–

      1. Mysteries are my favorite, I truly enjoy uncovering answers. Nice to know I won’t be running out.πŸ’•πŸ€£πŸ’•

      2. Agreed. I also keep learning about things that I feel shouldn’t have been mysteries to me for this long, such as that the Challenger Deep in the Mariana Trench is the deepest part of the Ocean. But that’s life. ^_^

  6. So many people write so many beautiful poem but there are very few & selective poems which carry revolutionary simplicity ❀️

    Keep lightening up universe within & outside ……

    Gratitude & Peace upon you πŸ™

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